I know its unfinished and you have more to add but make sure you get someone (other than yourself) to proof read before you put it out.
A bit of general information;
A web site has to be attractive to visitors if you want the all important repeat 'visits' which means it can not be neglected and has to be constantly updated with bulletins and monthly newsletters providing interesting content, (not necessarily, always on carpet cleaning).
It's not hits that count but
visits this is often compared to having a shop and getting potential clients to come in and browse as opposed to looking in the window and moving on.We can get 'hits in the tens of thousands and visits in the thousands each month.
With regards to your web site there are one or two areas I think you need to look at again, for example you list 'Prices' which when clicked goes on to explain they do not give prices, well why have it there then? this is an immediate let down to the visitor who will in all probabilty click and move on at that stage.
Its clear the target you are aiming at and your list of clients is impressive by any standards but the I feel the content lets the quality that you are trying to put across down some what (again this where proof reading come in),I think this is why some of the above say they got bored reading it as visitors will do I'm afraid
Its very important to note that visitors
will read a awfull lot of content and info 'So long as its interesting' and relevent to them, some others will just go direct to the page that interests them, then leave hopefully to return another time.
Hyperlinks in content are important as it means that highlighted areas that you want the visitor to read are easily skipped to with just one click making it easy for them to navigate through out your site and 'ease' of use is what its all about as one hold up such as 'click to enter' and many if not most move on.Harsh I know but its true as no doubt you have done yourself when surfing the net.
That said I hope I am not coming across as too critical as that is not my intention.The site is coming along fine and with a few tweeks here and there I am sure will be an impressive site for your clients to visit.