[paul saunders]

I would like your imput (good or bad) on my design.

I'm not very good at this sort of thing "yeah, I know it shows" :

Any imput will be greatfully recieved.

regards Paul

[supernova77]

Hi mate,

The wording seems ok... But I would change the font to something a bit more easily readable.

Andy

[ivesons mobile cleaners]

hi

the flyer looks good but i would losses the background image because i will cost you double to get them printed off at the printers

regards paul

[Paul Coleman]

I would like your imput (good or bad) on my design.

I'm not very good at this sort of thing "yeah, I know it shows" :

Any imput will be greatfully recieved.

regards Paul

I agree with Andy that the font needs changing but the rest of it seems straightforward and to the point.
A couple of minor grammatical things.
1) After area, there should be a full stop rather than a comma.
2) There should be a comma between reliable and friendly and also between free and no obligation (I think).

I do not usually say anything about typos but as it is a leaflet that will be going out to the public, I thought I had better mention them.

[Jason Atwell]

I like the background image, in my view, makes a better flyer, but yes it may cost more to be printed.

Are you not going to advertise for gutter cleans etc on your leaflet, i;e other services?

[paul saunders]

Hi mate,

The wording seems ok... But I would change the font to something a bit more easily readable.

Andy

 Cheers Andy, font now changed on the master copy. 

hi

the flyer looks good but i would losses the background image because i will cost you double to get them printed off at the printers

regards paul

 Thanks for your imput Paul, I'm not to bothered about the printing costs ............. £3.00 for 500 sheets of A5 paper ........... ink catrages £1.00 each colour. 

I would like your imput (good or bad) on my design.

I'm not very good at this sort of thing "yeah, I know it shows" :

Any imput will be greatfully recieved.

regards Paul

I agree with Andy that the font needs changing but the rest of it seems straightforward and to the point.
A couple of minor grammatical things.
1) After area, there should be a full stop rather than a comma.
2) There should be a comma between reliable and friendly and also between free and no obligation (I think).

I do not usually say anything about typos but as it is a leaflet that will be going out to the public, I thought I had better mention them.

Thank The Shiner gramma now corrected, comments appreciated

I like the background image, in my view, makes a better flyer, but yes it may cost more to be printed.

Are you not going to advertise for gutter cleans etc on your leaflet, i;e other services?

 Jase, my thoughts exactly about the background image. 

Still undecided about offering other services............ the wife might get jelous.

[Jason Atwell]

tell the wife these other services apply to her as well, and she even gets a discount!!

[Clear Vision]

Iwould change all the "I" to we.

Looks better. 

[ScrimShady]

this is the one i put out, they cost me about £200 for 5000 of them but i think they look better then the ones that you print out at home

[carl stanton]

good, but again a clear modern font, and make sure, Window cleaner is the most clear, you know a headline grabber!

[paul saunders]

I avoid putting the words "at a competitive price" on leaflets, from my previous experiences this brings in the calls from those looking for a cheaper service, something I am sure you want to avoid.

 A good point, any sugestions for anything to put in it's place.
 

tell the wife these other services apply to her as well, and she even gets a discount!!

 Nobody gets a discount ............ I'm too tight for that. 

Iwould change all the "I" to we.

Looks better. 

 There is no we ............ it's only me. 

this is the one i put out, they cost me about £200 for 5000 of them but i think they look better then the ones that you print out at home

 There's noting to see.............. can you email it to me please.

good, but again a clear modern font,and make sure, Window cleaner is the most clear, you know a headline grabber!

 Good point, thanks

I avoid putting the words "at a competitive price" on leaflets, from my previous experiences this brings in the calls from those looking for a cheaper service, something I am sure you want to avoid.

Agree with this sentiment completely. We daren't put "reassuringly expensive" but wouldn't mind giving the impression either!

"Do you need a window cleaner?" would do well at the top. It is the attention grabbing headline that potential customers see first.

On a good note you have a home/office number on the flyer: this is definitely a good thing since it will give customers a good impression of you. They will feel if you are confident enough to give them your details that you may well be around further down the line.

Also, if you do offer other services (ie guttering, PVC cleaning) do mention them. Many w/c's do not offer this and you could well hook some well paying one off work.

Hop this helps,
Ben

 I will try it this way around and see how it looks, cheers Ben


 Thanks to everyone who took the time to pass comment on my flyer, your imput has been greatfully recieved. Whe I have made all the relevent changes I'll upload a new image for your scrutiny.

 regards Paul

[Andy@w.c.s]

Just a thought but what about the method you are going to use
water fed pole /or trad
if trad you could put something like ladders still used
if you are already on the pole
maybe something like latest cleaning methods use 
Andy

[Central Window Cleaners]

I got my flyers from Aurapress at aurapress@ukonline.co.uk they did us
10k A5 full colour flyers on high gloss paper for £145 plus £25 delivery no VAT.

All I did was sent them the pdf file via email flyers arrived a week later.

Used them 3 times now great service.

[Pittmonkey]

There are a couple of simple rules to follow with leaflet’s/ flyers.

Lots of white space: Don’t make it look cluttered

Simple fonts: Easy to read easy on the eye

The advertising acronym A.I..D.A:

ATTENTION  Should command Attention (DO YOU NEED A WINDOW CLEANER) Having your name blasted across the top wont mean a thing unless you are a large company like M&S etc.

INTEREST Words or illustrations that lead to interest in the product (PURE WATER WFP etc)

DESIRE: The desire to use your product or service. Spell out the benefits of your service.Your USP (Unique Selling Point)

ACTION: All the info available for the customer to contact you, name, tel no’s, email, www etc.

Wayne

[clean team]

just do something like this

[clean team]

it dose not matter if they phone thinking you are cheep if you say competative. all that matters is they phone.you can then sell it to them.better to have people phoneing than none at all

[paul saunders]

Nice flyer Clean team, is that your own work or was it done for you

I got my flyers from Aurapress at aurapress@ukonline.co.uk they did us
10k A5 full colour flyers on high gloss paper for £145 plus £25 delivery no VAT.

All I did was sent them the pdf file via email flyers arrived a week later.

Used them 3 times now great service.

Do you have any samples of there work...... and do they do smaller batches eg 2500

There are a couple of simple rules to follow with leaflet’s/ flyers.

Lots of white space: Don’t make it look cluttered

Simple fonts: Easy to read easy on the eye

The advertising acronym A.I..D.A:

ATTENTION  Should command Attention (DO YOU NEED A WINDOW CLEANER) Having your name blasted across the top wont mean a thing unless you are a large company like M&S etc.

INTEREST Words or illustrations that lead to interest in the product (PURE WATER WFP etc)

DESIRE: The desire to use your product or service. Spell out the benefits of your service.Your USP (Unique Selling Point)

ACTION: All the info available for the customer to contact you, name, tel no’s, email, www etc.

Wayne

Lots of usefull info there Pittmonkey. 


 Anyway I've changed a few things .............. see what you think now.

[clean team]

cost me £20 for that. my mate did it for me.hear is one of my old ones see if you can get some one to redo it for you

[clean team]

flyer to big to post.if you give me your email address i will email it to you

[Pittmonkey]

Take a look here for some ideas

http://leafletsforyou.co.uk/samples.htm
Good prices!!!

Wayne