Looks good, although I personally would have "Window Cleaning" as big and bold as you can
i would have the web address and tel # higher up
It looks as if you have three business names "mark one cleaning services", "we clean it all" and "spotless-image"
You can't drive on the queen's hi-way without a number plate. Get one soon.
OK, I've taken on board a lot of what has been said, many thanks by the way, and have come up with this.