[simon smith50]

hi all
please give me your opinion of my new website
www.allcleanedup4you.co.uk
if you can send me an email with ideas to improve its rankings or any general content issues that you see would be most grateful
regards
simon

[TonyD]

I'd say maybe use a picture in the header, and more in the pages, but first off, definitely remove the READER WARNING statement, I can see where you're aiming but it looks really aggressive straight away, like you're saying - don't even think about getting a lower end price from us, we're expensive so F off.......NOW.
I think you should remove the google search box too, and maybe the clock, and the empty pages listed as empty.

[AJ]

You need to look at meta tags and alertnative text for your pics to help with your search engine results .
Search google for 'meta tag generator' and copy and paste results into your code.
use pictures that are more relevant, aircraft look nice but are they really relevant to cleaning? If they are, you need to show before and after pics. 
Grubby planes a dirty ash tray and a messy kitchen don't really sell it for you, find something more 'shiny'.
I would make your navigation buttons more obvious.
Maybe kill some of the red too.

Cheers
Alan

[Nathanael Jones]

Where do i start,.....


RED is a bad colour. I like the gradient design, but switch to a nice green maybe.

Negative wording (Reader warning) is going to loose a LOT of potential customers and you should remove every last trace of it. Sell how good you are, don't mention how bad everyone else is.

Your meta tags need a lot of work,.. your keywords shouldn't be capitalised either.

Get rid of text that is all capitals,.. in headers/links too.

Some text is white, some is black, some yellow,... choose one and go with it (I like the white).

Get rid of the google search and clock,.. replace with a pic of you in your work uniform (Head & shoulders) smiling at the camera

Get some good pics of you & your team working (NOT STOCK PHOTO'S), your vehicles, and ask permission from a few customers to take before & after pics,... real pics sell.

Your links page is missing a link to my business website, the Guild website & ACS,.. probably your worst mistake!!


Keep working on it Simon,.. a good website takes a couple of weeks to get right.

[drwindows]

READERS WARNING

IF YOU ARE LOOKING FOR A SLAP DASH ,CHEAP AND NASTY CLEANING SERVICE  KINDLY SAVE YOURSELF TIME AND ENERGY AND CLICK OFF AND LOOK AT OTHER CLEANING WEBSITES AS WE ARE SURE YOU WILL FIND WHAT YOU ARE LOOKING FOR ELSEWHERE.

WAY too hostile!

[Gleaming windows]

Where do i start,.....


RED is a bad colour. I like the gradient design, but switch to a nice green maybe.

Negative wording (Reader warning) is going to loose a LOT of potential customers and you should remove every last trace of it. Sell how good you are, don't mention how bad everyone else is.

Your meta tags need a lot of work,.. your keywords shouldn't be capitalised either.

Get rid of text that is all capitals,.. in headers/links too.

Some text is white, some is black, some yellow,... choose one and go with it (I like the white).

Get rid of the google search and clock,.. replace with a pic of you in your work uniform (Head & shoulders) smiling at the camera

Get some good pics of you & your team working (NOT STOCK PHOTO'S), your vehicles, and ask permission from a few customers to take before & after pics,... real pics sell.

Your links page is missing a link to my business website, the Guild website & ACS,.. probably your worst mistake!!


Keep working on it Simon,.. a good website takes a couple of weeks to get right.

Everything he said

[ftp]

Get rid of the picture of the guy chucking up in the toilet.

[Gleaming windows]

 

[simon smith50]

thank you all
please have  another look i have taken all on board and think i nearly have a reasonable site now
please tell if you dissagree
regards
simon

[R W C]

that color hurts my eyes, id only be on that site for 2 seconds before hitting the exit button, needs to be darker.

pita

[Gleaming windows]

On the left some text is in lower case, some in caps, .......make sure it is one or the other, because it looks slap dash and thats not what you are offering according to your site.

In fact you have one sentence at least on the front page with words mixed up....some caps some lower case.

Make sure its cleaned up accordingly throughout the site.

The red isnt good to look at, light blue perhaps?

[Gleaming windows]

The font changes from one page to another. The green banner is there on some pages but not on others.

Just seen you are using 2 different font sizes on the same page.

BE CONSISTENT!


My personal opinion about websites (and this is just a general comment, not about thisone in particular) for us guys is that we are trying to sell a service which has a great deal to do with tidiness, being orderly and clean; in a pleasing to the eye kind of way. One which we feel comfortable with and at ease.


If a potential customer comes across a site looking for a cleaner and they are presented with an untidy, ramshackle, disorderly, messy, cluttered and generally displeasing and awkward to the eye site they'll go elsewhere.

[R W C]

The font changes from one page to another. The green banner is there on some pages but not on others.

Just seen you are using 2 different font sizes on the same page.

BE CONSISTENT!


My personal opinion about websites (and this is just a general comment, not about thisone in particular) for us guys is that we are trying to sell a service which has a great deal to do with tidiness, being orderly and clean; in a pleasing to the eye kind of way. One which we feel comfortable with and at ease.


If a potential customer comes across a site looking for a cleaner and they are presented with an untidy, ramshackle, disorderly, messy, cluttered and generally displeasing and awkward to the eye site they'll go elsewhere.

do you not get much from yours then Matt 

[simon smith50]

thanks for your comments all taken on board

[Craig - CW Window Cleaning]

I find reading the text hard the colour is straining my eye's !

[Nathanael Jones]

Make the text darker and the font uniform,...

vast improvement already tho.

[craig mcneil]

ANother one complaining about the text colour. Stick to black and you won't go wrong.

[Gleaming windows]

The font changes from one page to another. The green banner is there on some pages but not on others.

Just seen you are using 2 different font sizes on the same page.

BE CONSISTENT!


My personal opinion about websites (and this is just a general comment, not about thisone in particular) for us guys is that we are trying to sell a service which has a great deal to do with tidiness, being orderly and clean; in a pleasing to the eye kind of way. One which we feel comfortable with and at ease.


If a potential customer comes across a site looking for a cleaner and they are presented with an untidy, ramshackle, disorderly, messy, cluttered and generally displeasing and awkward to the eye site they'll go elsewhere.

do you not get much from yours then Matt 

Oi! Thats rich   

[Sunshine/Cleaning]

Have a look at other Websites and think about what you find attractive and pleasing.

Keep it simple and clean. Well done for having a go, but I would consider asking for some one on one help.

[ftp]

This one