[Jonny jones]

hi guys

my new website is going live on friday, please take a look and let me what you think,

www.castlecleaningservice.co.uk

thanx jonny

[MaidFresh]

I hope you dont mind a bit of critisism.

I dont like it!
1 page is never enough. It doesn't tell the potential customer anything.
The pictures at the bottom are too bright.
The clickable area for your email address needs correcting (Its too far left).
If you've bought the domain castlecleaningservice.co.uk why not use it for email like email@castlecleaningservice.co.uk instead of AOL? Using AOL email makes you look like a 1 man band.
It basically looks like a leaflet/flyer copied onto the web.

On the positive side, I like your slogan :-)

[nat1]

Hi, I was just wondering why there is no where to click on for more info (ie) Commercial/domestic cleaning, what areas do you cover?, do you provide products?, about us page? people do like a bit more info.  I've just built my own which for a first i think is rather good, take a look www.brooklandscleaningservices.com


Ta Nat

[vacman]

I take the point that one page seems brief BUT! when you see that absolute waffle and twaddle shoe-horned into some websites, I have to say that less can sometimes be more.

In all, i dont think there is much more that you really want to say. Some websites i've been to seem to be padded out with page after page of the same information, albiet worded and presented differently, but never the less saying the same. I suppose you could make 4 pages from that one page, say a home page, a "services we provide" page, a "why choose us?" page, and a contact page, but i certainly dont think any more information is required.

I like it. 

[vacman]

Nat i am pleased you mention vacuuming hard floors now.

However, i see that the punctuation has worsened! It was almost perfect before! 

[shelton]

I agree with vacman, some sites nowadays are just choc full of padding.  Less is more, I think.

[Jonny jones]

hi guys

my new website is going live on friday, please take a look and let me what you think,

www.castlecleaningservice.co.uk

thanx jonny

hello i did say friday, this is only the front page thats just there while it was getting constructed,
have a look friday

[vacman]

hello Johnny

So what are these other pages going to say then???

[Jonny jones]

hi guys

ITS READY:

[suffolkclean]

A massive improvement on the first one - it looks really great

Barbara

[Normanj]

Looking good 

[vacman]

Hi

The use of capital letters is not always correct; you  have them  in places where none should be, and vice versa. Sorry.

[Ralph Smith]

Nice one

[suffolkclean]

Hi Ralph - Just to say your website looks really good but on the left panel - I think it looks like 'Special Otters'!! the typeface makes it look like 'otters'