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C.C.S.

  • Posts: 954
what do u think guys?
« on: April 27, 2009, 09:47:18 pm »
any thoughts ,advices welcome.it's not 100% done but it's nearly there.thanks
www.colchester-cleaning-services.co.uk
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Nathanael Jones

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Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2009, 09:49:09 pm »
???
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Blue Frog Systems

  • Posts: 3813
Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2009, 09:50:21 pm »
Guessing its your website and i think you forgot to post a link.

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Only those who risk going too far will truly know how far they can actually go

C.C.S.

  • Posts: 954
Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2009, 09:52:07 pm »
have another look
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daniel worgan

Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2009, 09:54:24 pm »
I am in clacton and get calls sometimes for domestic cleans in colchester.
I can add you to my blog site if you like?

Dan ;)
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C.C.S.

  • Posts: 954
Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2009, 09:58:37 pm »
Quote from: daniel worgan on April 27, 2009, 09:54:24 pm
I am in clacton and get calls sometimes for domestic cleans in colchester.
I can add you to my blog site if you like?

Dan ;)
yes that will be grate.i'll another section on my website where i can add other links.thanks
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michael papworth

Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #6 on: April 27, 2009, 09:59:34 pm »
Yes, the content is pretty good, but ...

Get someone to check your spellimg and punctuation's.
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Blue Frog Systems

  • Posts: 3813
Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #7 on: April 27, 2009, 10:01:17 pm »
Quote from: Wally the Window Washer on April 27, 2009, 09:59:34 pm
Yes, the content is pretty good, but ...

Get someone to check your spellimg and punctuation's.

 :-X
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Only those who risk going too far will truly know how far they can actually go

daniel worgan

Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2009, 07:45:36 am »
Quote from: J&A Cleaning Services on April 27, 2009, 09:58:37 pm
Quote from: daniel worgan on April 27, 2009, 09:54:24 pm
I am in clacton and get calls sometimes for domestic cleans in colchester.
I can add you to my blog site if you like?

Dan ;)
yes that will be grate.i'll another section on my website where i can add other links.thanks

Your details have now been added to the blog....

www.upvc-cleaning-services.blogspot.com

Dan :)
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AuRavelling79

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Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2009, 08:07:51 am »
Off to work shortly so I've just read the home page. (I'll read the rest this pm if I remember!)

Looks good - my observations:-

Leave out the dates 2006 and 2008 - they are not long enough ago to be a benefit in the mind of the customer. Just tell them what you do.

1 million insurance (especially in the commercial world) does not sound enough. Leave the amount out or upgrade your cover to 5 million. Or just leave it as fully insured.

Split up the phone numbers and post code to make them easier to read.

(01324) 0987655  is easier to read than 013240987655 IMO.
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MJH

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Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #10 on: April 28, 2009, 11:19:16 am »
Quote from: J&A Cleaning Services on April 27, 2009, 09:47:18 pm
any thoughts ,advices welcome.it's not 100% done but it's nearly there.thanks
www.colchester-cleaning-services.co.uk

Can you clean my golf clubs? ;D
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C.C.S.

  • Posts: 954
Re: what do u think guys?
« Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 12:14:54 pm »
hi thanks a lot all i'll try and check the spelling again
maybe you want to do a link exchange ...
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