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collins82002

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sign design opinion please
« on: February 17, 2009, 12:19:59 am »

geefree

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2009, 12:32:03 am »
nice.  ;)

ftp

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2009, 07:53:18 am »
Don't like it. Get rid of the shadow and it will look much sharper. I like the background but you seem to have two different typefaces at least on there. Can the blue under the black be taken away from the bold text?

collins82002

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2009, 08:15:49 am »
what do you mean blue away from black??

Bobs Window Cleaning

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #4 on: February 17, 2009, 08:24:23 am »
Think he means the main large wording is a mix of blue and black. Dont look so nice on here but prob would look ok on the actual flyer.

Bob
Why oh Why did he spell my name as bod & not bob on my wedding invites.

collins82002

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2009, 09:12:26 am »


Revised Design

Chameleon

Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #6 on: February 17, 2009, 09:20:55 am »
No, sorry I think I preferred the first one, the writing style at least.

As for the title, I'm not so sure, I likes the first, but the second is nice too!  :-\

The writing just looks plain now! :P

mikethechamois

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #7 on: February 17, 2009, 01:48:54 pm »
second one is a lot easier to read...................both are a nice

love the back ground

Ian Mason

Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #8 on: February 17, 2009, 04:08:50 pm »
Hi,

I think the first one looks cool!

I have noticed that some companies like to advertise with very clear lettering, & some companies use less clear lettering, as a kind of quiz/puzzle on people, as they then spend more time looking at these ads until fianally working out what is written.

collins82002

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #9 on: February 17, 2009, 04:15:59 pm »
Thanks to everyone so far who has given their opinion tomorrow will post my final sign after afew tweeks tonight.
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

paulben

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #10 on: February 17, 2009, 04:40:56 pm »
Like second one better but think I would rather have your name in plain black rather than with white edging but its down to personal choice
Do not steal the government hates competition

paulben

  • Posts: 1041
Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #11 on: February 17, 2009, 05:01:31 pm »
If thats a home number I would take it out saves drunks ringing about 3am
Do not steal the government hates competition

R W C

Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #12 on: February 17, 2009, 05:51:15 pm »
No do not remove landline  ::) i would never employ someone with just a mobile.

br00ksy

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #13 on: February 17, 2009, 07:28:03 pm »
Drop the background back with a transparency about 20 - 30% its nice but too bold and is competing with the text.
For the heading use a black outline with white text and a bolder font will make it stand off the busy background.
The layout isn't balanced with the bullet points so move them into an ordered look, and run the phone numbers underneath along the whole length with a bolder font.
Never use more than two different fonts.

collins82002

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #14 on: February 17, 2009, 08:17:57 pm »
You mean like this


dave.e

Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #15 on: February 17, 2009, 08:36:58 pm »
very nice mate like the first one the best and the back ground is a1.

Bazzy1999

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #16 on: February 17, 2009, 08:56:17 pm »
Like the first one best aswell....

Bazz...

AuRavelling79

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #17 on: February 17, 2009, 09:08:58 pm »
That is very good - "M" should have a full stop after it (or the "G" shouldn't) and not a rule but the "or" should not have a capital "O".
It's a game of three halves!

collins82002

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #18 on: February 17, 2009, 09:21:17 pm »
modified above

Thanks

ftp

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Re: sign design opinion please
« Reply #19 on: February 17, 2009, 09:25:51 pm »
Might have sounded a little harsh but i didn't like the first one because on my screen the type just looks fuzzy - a bit like forgetting to put your glasses on. In my opinion it needs to be as clear as possible and as big as you can get away with. Just my opinion.  ;)