[Mike Osbourne]

Looks good derek.

Why Us should have a question mark after it.

[markpowell]

Derek,
The site looks good, i like the pink background as well.
A couple of spelling mistakes i spotted on the upholstery page.
1. toy instead of to
2. intern instead of in-turn
3. rip and scuff need a commer inbetween

There seems to be a few paragraphs throughout the site that need full stops or commers or where commers are there are 2 instead of 1.
Dont want to seem picky just wanted to let you know the errors before the site goes live.
Good luck with the site, i am getting DP to do ours in the near future.
Mark

[stevegunn]

On the resources page it's useful not use full

May as well be one of the first to request an exchange of links

[colin thomas]

use,, a chat about any stains that concern you and a discussion about furniture removal. Then we’ll give you a price and if your happy to go a head
we’ll arrange a time to suit you for the clean. We pride ourselves on doing the best possible job we can. We have a very professional approach to our work with a friendly approach to our customers.  So give us a call or use the contact page,  we’ll call you back to arrange your free no obligation quote so you can see for your self.
in the last line, 'your self' is one word.

Double commas after 'use' and

[derek west]

thanks to everyone who's pointed out all the mistakes, cheers guys really appreciate them all, and thanks for all the positive comments,
just like to point out that most of the mistakes are mine and not marks at dp.

need some seo on it now and to be honest, i don't mind paying good money for the right results.
cheers again all who've helped out
derek

[Paul_Ashworth]

Derek,
This is my new site, like yours there is still a lot of amends and typo's comma's missing etc.

htp://www.chorleycarpetcleaning.co.uk/

Do you cover the chorley cheshire area ??

Paul

[Joe H]

One of the pages has a sentence which is a mile too long IMO.

[derek west]

paul
no, chorley is junction 26? 27? m6, bit too far for me, warringtons too far unless its a biggy.
joe
take a deep breathe.
seriously though, which one?
i type like i talk so thats probably why
derek

[derek west]

paul
found this on your FAQ page

We also attend many cleaning shows though out England to research new cleaning methods and techniques.

missing an "r" in through.

this game is fun all though i'm still losing by a mile.
derek

[Joe H]

Upholstery page - second paragragh is just one sentence - its tooooo looonnngggg.

Also look at the page with the benefits especially benefit 1 and benefit 4 (I think) - type overlapping

[derek west]

cheers joe for pointin out the long sentence. but i all ready pointed out benefits 1 and 4 in the original post so no one else would.
derek

[colin thomas]

derek, no disrespect but use a spell checker, there are so many bad spellings or bad grammar i could be here all night!! that said, on a positive note, i think the sight is really good,

colin

[derek west]

no disrespect taken colin. happy for the comments and they will all be taken on board and corrected.
all though i didn't realise there were that many mistakes, possibly need a night course in spelling and grammer, or less beer, night course it is then.

derek

[Tony Gill Carpet Smart]

Yep nice site Derek has Mark Roberts done it i could do to get one done.

CHEERS TONY East Yorkshire

[colin thomas]

derek, although is one word

[derek west]

cheers tony, it was mark higgins, from dpprint.
top man.
derek

[JandS]

Leather page  "we clean any types" should be all.

Why choose us page    "all to common" should be too.

Home page    "to go a head" should be ahead.

Leather page as a 7 line long sentence.

Don't know if this is deliberate but

Contact page     Name    e mail     phone and town titles aren't in line

Looks a nice site although not keen myself on colours, that's a personal thing though and each ti his or her own.

Use a spell checker.

John

[clinton]

Derek

Does mark not spell check it

[JandS]

He said spelling to wrong.
Is there meant to be 1 special offer or is it my browser.

John

[JandS]

If he does the spell checker needs a spell checker!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

John