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derek west

pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« on: February 15, 2009, 04:43:16 pm »
pedantic people wanted to nit pick at my new website.

yeah its pink, so what.
there is an overlap fault on the commercial page benefit 1 and 4 but other than that it seem ok, but i know what you guys are like so i'm sure you'll find something for me.

can anyone find any typos or anything else, ie... not working in certain browsers etc.... any faults reported will be greatly recieved

ps.... mike halliday, do you like the job i did on the leather page, i did a well good job on that leather suite don't ya think ;D
pps... i'll change it if it bothers you but mark put it there and said you'll be ok with it

www.cheshire-carpet-cleaning.com/

derek
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Mike Halliday

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #1 on: February 15, 2009, 04:59:56 pm »
Derek, use any of my photos I don't mind.

on the home page I think the pink writing on the brown background is hard to read, just looked at the other pages and they are all the same, the heading at the top, pink on brown is hard to read.
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Mike Halliday.  www.henryhalliday.co.uk

Mike Halliday

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #2 on: February 15, 2009, 05:03:00 pm »
'MESSAGE' spelt wrong on contacts page 'MESSGAE'
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Mike Halliday.  www.henryhalliday.co.uk

derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2009, 05:07:53 pm »
can't agree on the pink on brown, even my wife says its easily readable and shes as blind as a bat, hence she married me, ;D
unless the colours appear different seen in different browsers?
but cheers for the message typo hawkeye, well spotted. ive read it twice and didn't spot that.
cheers mike
oh! and cheers for the piccies
derek
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Steve Barnett (Carpet Care Plus)

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #4 on: February 15, 2009, 05:11:06 pm »
February spelt wrong on special offers page.

Like Mike says the pink is hard to read on the brown, but I do like the pink theme it's a bit different.

Having trouble reading some of the text on my browser, some of the black text is sitting on top of other text even on the highest text size - could be my laptop though, about 3 years old now, maybe time to upgrade to a different browser.

Think the site looks good mate - I don't care for the truckmount v portable bit, but then I would say that as I run a Ninja - but if I had a TM then I would push the benefit also. (Does it really cost £ 50k ?)

Steve
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Mike Halliday

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #5 on: February 15, 2009, 05:12:34 pm »
UPHOLSTERY

.......Because material sofa’s need care and attention..... INCORRECT GRAMMER

.......to when it comes toy our soft furnishings.......
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Mike Halliday.  www.henryhalliday.co.uk

nevil

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #6 on: February 15, 2009, 05:16:33 pm »
I like your site.

I have never been to keen on the 20X power thing when promoting truckmount service.
I personally think if you are going to state 20x the power then the maths should work out.

You have 2hp versus 64hp. My calculations make that 32x the power.

Pedantic enough for you  :)
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #7 on: February 15, 2009, 05:24:03 pm »
seriously, this is all good stuff, thanks guys, all noted on paper and i'll tell mike higgins from dp when i phone tomorrow.
keep em coming, and to all you porty guys, i'm sorry for the hp bo11ox, its just marketting and wasn't even my idea.

mike h
on your prices page right down at the bottom in small writing its got recoomend.

The cleaning of fabric is the most challenging of all the work we undertake, we always recoomend a home consultation to correctly identify the fibre and any discuss any problems

pay back ;D ;D ;D

your turn ;D

derek
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clinton

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #8 on: February 15, 2009, 05:26:02 pm »
Derek

looks a good site mate.

You can get mark to run a spell check on the mistakes ???
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #9 on: February 15, 2009, 05:30:03 pm »
actually mike, theres another mistake in that sentence towards the end. was gonna save it for later but may as wel use it now ;D

derek
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robert meldrum

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #10 on: February 15, 2009, 05:33:57 pm »
very pretty !
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #11 on: February 15, 2009, 05:36:04 pm »
cheers for that robert, its aimed at the ladies, after all, there the ones that make the cc decisions.
derek
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richy27

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #12 on: February 15, 2009, 05:38:30 pm »
Looks pretty good derek  mine should be with me in few weeks
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gwrightson

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #13 on: February 15, 2009, 05:38:35 pm »
Derick,

what I really like to know......... Is that your daughter in the pics ;)

geoff
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who ever said dont knock before u try ,i never tried dog crap but i know i wouldnt like  haha

Mike Halliday

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #14 on: February 15, 2009, 05:39:22 pm »
on special offers page  there's an an extra space.


.............we ‘ll clean the smallest for FREE...........................

and I would increase the photo in the bottom left corner to fill the space better


on gallery page

 'carpet befor' instead of 'carpet before'
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Mike Halliday.  www.henryhalliday.co.uk

derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #15 on: February 15, 2009, 05:43:29 pm »
fck me mike, i wouldn't play you at scrabble for money. "your good"
you win i give up, but if you can find anymore then let me know even though i'm starting to feel illiterate. ;D
derek
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #16 on: February 15, 2009, 05:44:51 pm »
she does call me daddy occasionally geoff but we won't go into that ;D
its my wife.
derek
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Mike Halliday

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #17 on: February 15, 2009, 05:49:47 pm »
Derek its like you spotting the mistakes on my site, I read it a 100 times and not spotted them.

the problem is when you read what you have written YOU DON'T ACTUAL READ IT!!  your mind knows what it is supposed to say, so that's what it 'reads'
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Mike Halliday.  www.henryhalliday.co.uk

derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #18 on: February 15, 2009, 05:53:02 pm »
your right mike
you don't see your own mistakes. i'll settle for that. ;)
think thats everything now, can't see there being anymore.
or have i spoke too soon.
derek
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daysdeepclean

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #19 on: February 15, 2009, 05:53:44 pm »
Looks very good Derek, I like the pictures as they paint a thousand words, the leather sofa in particular!

I'm a lazy sod when it comes to reading to be honest, so I didn't spot any smelling pistakes ;D ;D ;D
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