I'm putting the finishing touches on a new website for John Garnett & I'd appreciate your comments. I've spell checked it,... but I'm blind to spelling/grammar errors, so let me know any mistakes you spot!
www.johnthewindowcleaner.com
I think you have done a wonderful job and I'm suitably impressed here are some of my observations and I hope you take them in the spirit they are given as it's sometimes hard to accept criticisms after all the hard work you have obviously done.
Services page left hand column:
"Would you wash your hands in cold water? Would you wash
you clothes or dishes in cold water? Of course not! Hot water cleans better, it's common sense!" (word needs changing)
"This method of high reach cleaning fully complies with the HSA "Work at height" regulations which strictly
limit the use of ladders as temporary workstations for window cleaning use." (word needs changing)
Home page right hand column services:
"Whether you need a single window or a block of flats cleaned, we have the solution you need at a price you can afford. At John the Window Cleaner, our goal is to provide you with a courteous, expedient and professional service of the highest
caliber." (spelling)
Homepage:
Paragraph underneath the Therm Clean logo, you have used the word "specialise" which can be spelt with a Z or S as you have done it, and is the correct English way. On your payments page online payment paragraph near the bottom you have used the word "authorized" but spelt the American way, I know in this day and age both are correct but it's best to be consistent and spell them one way or the other.
Another observation and I mean no disrespect whatsoever is that the photo of John used on the homepage does have a feel of FBI 10 most wanted about it.
About page:
Personal preference only I hate Testimonials on a website, they can be made up to say just what we want, but to be fair there is not many of them.