Just for those here is the flyer that Kevin D worked on;
The first is my original flyer the second Kevin D's


I may not be a marketing genus, I rather leave that to the ones who live and breath it as a full time career, but I do know what works and what dosen't for me.
Everyone on this site has done some form of leaflet drop, with varying decrees of sucess, but overall the conversion rate has worked out out 5 jobs per 1000 leaflets delivered.
How is it best way to get my leaflet to work? is the "holy grail" question.
Lets look on how we read those leaflets that are pushed though are door on a daily basis, what do you do when one drops on you doormat? have a good think about this because its important on how you construct your leaflet.
Now lets look at what does happen, the brain takes a couple of seconds to scan the leaflet and if it does not find anything that it likes it reject it.
So for those seconds we need our leaflet to grab the brains attention to carry on reading, with the leaflets that have seen debated, lets look at them.
The 1st one is set out quite simply and you are drawn to the words "window cleaner" which is what you want, because this will carry your message to them and if they have thought about getting a window cleaner then they will read on.
Now do we need them to read everything that you do and don't do, how you do it, in fact everything is there except the price, after they have absorded all of this information there are no question left, they can ask you apart from the price.
The whole point of this leaflet drop is to generate telephone calls to your business, where you can sell "yourself" and your "business".
By answering these question that you have freely and wastefully given away on the leaflet you have taken away the opportunity for them to call you.
The second leaflet, well does it convay the message that you are a "window cleaner"?.
Those first few seconds where the brain is going to make its decision, you are drawn to the picture image of a couple who seem to like the warm of a duffet. So is this leaflet trying to sell me bedding? or because they seem so cosy maybe "central heating" in fact it dosen't "scream" out that you are a window cleaner, until you come to the small print, but by them the 2 seconds have elasped and the brain has rejected the leaflet to the waste bin.
Try something simple like
Window Cleaner
CALL ME The brain now has scanned everthing in those most important seconds, and it will make it decision on whether it wants more information on window cleaning, if it does then they have no choose but to call you.
Once they called you, then you sell yourelf and your business and the customer is yours.