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[GQC] Tim

  • Posts: 4536
Help with putting together a wfp leaflet.
« on: November 17, 2008, 12:06:22 pm »
Just wondering how this sounds.

I don't know what is correct English on the H&S part, is it :

•   Fully Compliant to Health & Safety legislation 

or

•   Fully Compliant with Health & Safety  (legislation?)

? Or is both correct? I'm not a native English speaker, so sometimes it can be confusing.  ???  :D


Quote
“Quality window cleaning and
Excellent customer service”


Do you need a professional, reliable and fully insured window cleaning service?

X Window Cleaning is expanding their existing client base in your area.



•   We clean ALL windows up to 60ft,  and clean frames and sills every visit.
•   We are Reliable and Regular, with excellent customer references.
•   We also clean :
Conservatories, uPVC Guttering, Fascias and Soffits.
•   Fully Compliant to Health & Safety legislation 
•   Windows cleaned Weekly, Fortnightly, Monthly, or Six Weekly.
•   Please contact us to arrange a free quotation.

tel
email

Address

[GQC] Tim

  • Posts: 4536
Re: Help with putting together a wfp leaflet.
« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2008, 12:48:30 pm »
Anyone? I need some help quick, I'm going to print some off in a minute. :)

steven ainger

  • Posts: 1953
Re: Help with putting together a wfp leaflet.
« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2008, 12:56:41 pm »
wording looks ok to me,
the only thing i would do differant is put conservatory roofs instead of conservatories, also i dont know if this is the finished article or just the wording, but it doesnt look very eye catching or proffesional

[GQC] Tim

  • Posts: 4536
Re: Help with putting together a wfp leaflet.
« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2008, 01:08:35 pm »
wording looks ok to me,
the only thing i would do differant is put conservatory roofs instead of conservatories, also i dont know if this is the finished article or just the wording, but it doesnt look very eye catching or proffesional

Oh, it's literally just the wording that I copy and pasted. :)

Glad the wording is okay.

Paul Coleman

Re: Help with putting together a wfp leaflet.
« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2008, 06:07:19 pm »
Just wondering how this sounds.

I don't know what is correct English on the H&S part, is it :

•   Fully Compliant to Health & Safety legislation 

or

•   Fully Compliant with Health & Safety  (legislation?)

? Or is both correct? I'm not a native English speaker, so sometimes it can be confusing.  ???  :D


Quote
“Quality window cleaning and
Excellent customer service”


Do you need a professional, reliable and fully insured window cleaning service?

X Window Cleaning is expanding their existing client base in your area.



•   We clean ALL windows up to 60ft,  and clean frames and sills every visit.
•   We are Reliable and Regular, with excellent customer references.
•   We also clean :
Conservatories, uPVC Guttering, Fascias and Soffits.
•   Fully Compliant to Health & Safety legislation 
•   Windows cleaned Weekly, Fortnightly, Monthly, or Six Weekly.
•   Please contact us to arrange a free quotation.

tel
email

Address


Tim.  It definitely should be "Fully Compliant with Health & Safety  (legislation?).
Everything else looks fine to me.

Trotsky

Re: Help with putting together a wfp leaflet.
« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2008, 06:28:25 pm »
 8) sounds good, I really like the first two lines... ;)

Mark Sadler

  • Posts: 121
Re: Help with putting together a wfp leaflet.
« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2008, 06:38:29 pm »
Domestic custys are not really bothered what you use to clean there windows as long as they sparkle.

I been wfp for 2 years now and i never mentioned it once on my leaflets i always get an excellent response from them.
Mark Sadler

Tosh

Re: Help with putting together a wfp leaflet.
« Reply #7 on: November 17, 2008, 06:42:53 pm »
Tim,

I'd keep it simple if I were you.  This is the wording I use, and I 'stole the idea' from another tradesman:

Quote
Do you want regular window cleaners?

Who are fully insured.

Who take pride in their work.

We are an established family buinsess that services Chepstow and the surrounding areas.

Call us now for free quote.


It's a nice shiny one with pictures and stuff.