[richywilts]

alrite guys

www.windowcleandirect.co.uk

this is my newish website its still not complete still got another meeting with the designer to reword it and put some pics of my own up, we just threw this together to get it live on the web we will be overhauling the wordin etc. before anyone jumps in saying there my pics etc i did put a post up askin if i could lend some pics as my house was broke into and my digi camera was stolen!!! so as an when i get round to gettin another camera i will use my own pics so it original!!

like to hear wat you all think cheers

[garry]

 website looks good, be better if you had a landline number as well :

[richywilts]

i have got one but was moving to new area but changed mind now so need to put me normal number on to it!!

[tomy jackson]

looks good

[DaveG]

Looks good mate ...not flashy and to the point

[dmlservices]

i like it ,simple and does the job 

daz

[Jimmy1]

I really like it 

[tonylee]

loks really good.
Although I don't understand the pictures with soap on them and the pole.
Tony

[richywilts]

as i said the website isnt fully completed at mo we just put some pics in to fill the gaps whilst i wait to get some decent pics once i get a new camera as last one was stolen!!!

cheers for positive comment everyone

[Andrew McCann]

It's good. Nice and easy to read etc.

I would change "relatively new method of cleaning known as" to
"tried and proven method of cleaning known as"

Obvious reasons for that 

Andrew

[richywilts]

i know a lot of the wording was thrown together by the web designer and he didnt really kno wat to put iv been working on a lot of the wording in all the sections, hopefully will sound a lot more professional.

thanks for pointing that out andre

do u think i should lose the "about" section and replace with a health and safety section

[seandyer2003]

Whats pure about soapy water It looks like the gardener is about to smash the window with a spade

[DCS Dorset]

love the site but heres a few things i noticed

no land line phone number- rings alarmbells doode. most cowboys only use a mobile number.

no personal pics. there all copyed and pasted from other sites. its ok if your perspective client hasnt shopped around but if they have they will notice.

[Andrew McCann]

Rich.

I would add a health and safety section. A good about us page should be there.

Yes the wording needs tidying up a bit here and there but overall I really like the site. It looks very pro and will be a great asset to your business.

Guys...  Richy has stated that he will add his own pics. I have seen the ones with soap all over the windows before but they will be replaced.

I would also get a landline number on there ASAP.

I don't know about search engine optimisation either.. I haven't looked at the code.. not that I would really understand it anyway   

Andrew

[mr D]

sorry andrew ref:pics.

i as per normal i didnt look at all the posts b4 jumping in! naughty me.

[richywilts]

im going to merge the about us into the home page n replace the about us section with health and safety, iv got my own conservatory clean tmoz hopefully get sum gud pics with me dads camera.landline will be put onto the website when i meet up with the web designer as  say i was supposed to be moving to a new area with different telephone code.

[mr D]

pics are fine mate but as i said they are on nearly evey one on this sites own pages. but then i'm a sad git coz i know that. tas i mentioned b4 the layout is great and i love the green colour code!! i was gonna use green my self but couldnt get hold of a green van!

[Trotsky]

  Very good!
I also like the Green look
(I would echo some of the comments above, like telephone number...)
But I really like it!

[richywilts]

i went with the green coz a lot of people go for the blues etc, my old employer had green n black n i liked it so thought id go with it too.

[mr D]

mines blue and yellow. i wanted yellow and black (London Wasps) but do you think i could find a black or yellow van any where.