[tailorcreative]

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[JandS]

Bloody hell     anybody get all that.
Think they told us what they do about 4 times in 4 different ways none of them straightforward.

John

[Robert Watson]

I would have thought it would be better to finish your own site first.

[derek west]

excellent comment rabby.
derek

[Chris Galloway]

Someone posted this website a few weeks back, and its still not done.. lmao!  :

[Kev Loomes]

I gave up after the first 3 lines :

[Barry Livingstone]

quote from there web site.....
We also get the opportunity collaborate with other creative / design agencies worldwide which is nice.



bless her its NICE

[Robert Watson]

It`s "CHEAP" though.  : don`t mean to be bitchy but after all that, no website. Come on.

[garry22]

Attention Newbies.

If you ever want to know how to write killer sales copy.... take note of this.

Make sure your own ad copy never ever sounds like this stuff above..

They even want to spend your hard earned cash on "experimental" adverts!

[Cathedral Floorcare]

"Our work is neatly planned, designed, built and populated in-house by our creative and technical teams. Having a specialist technical production studio in Belfast means we have took extra time develop our own systems - including content management system’s and E Marketing tools which caters clients from all sectors worldwide."

When do you plan to start using correct grammar? I count four mistakes in that sentence alone. If the proof reading of your own spam is that bad then I wouldn't trust you with any of my own.  :

[derek west]

ok i'll have a go

1)should it be "taken" not "took"
2) missed the word "to" in between the words "time develop"
 thats it for me, can any one point out the other 2, english was never my strong point, but i'm obviously better than there proof reader.
derek

[Shaun_Ashmore]

Great marketers do say that incorrect grammar and bad spelling makes people look up at take the person to task often engaging in a job!

tHencs

Sahaun XX

[Kev Loomes]

Theirs:

"Our work is neatly planned, designed, built and populated in-house by our creative and technical teams. Having a specialist technical production studio in Belfast means we have took extra time develop our own systems - including content management system’s and E Marketing tools which caters clients from all sectors worldwide."



Should read as:

"Our work is neatly planned, designed, built and populated in-house by our creative and technical teams. Having a specialist technical production studio in Belfast means that we have taken the extra time to develop our own systems - including content management systems and E Marketing tools, which cater for clients from all sectors worldwide."

7 mistakes.....I must be bored :

[derek west]

either that or you can't count, i can only see 6 bold items in your correction, or is it me that can't count.
anyway 6 or 7 its still keeeerrrrrrrraaaaaaaaP
derek
seriously though, how come i only counted 6?

[Kev Loomes]

Because Derek, you missed the commer after 'tools' :

Tut, tut.

[derek west]

awe bugger,
i was never good at spot the difference,
sorry kev my mistake, bo pah.
derek

[Jim_77]

Because Derek, you missed the commer after 'tools' :

Tut, tut.

Comma? :