Conceptually, yeah brilliant, I think a lot of us would like to do something similar but either don't have the skills or the drive to go do it.
Ditto the comments about the music, although I'm sure you wouldn't consider The Prodigy your 1st choice for a "serious" production

Are you familiar with "Dusty" Roberts' stuff he does on the Rug Badger and rug cleaning? His short films are just a camcorder recording of him talking and demonstrating, obviously well rehearsed but very very simple. All that's added really are some graphic captions to reinforce and clarify the flow of the films. If you haven't seen any, stick "rug badger" into youtube and you'll find them.
Good effort mate, very inventive, maybe you'll start a trend!
Would be good to see any further ones you do, they may be an inspiration to the rest of us to do similar
