[wilclean]

Hi all


       I've just re-done my web site www.wil-clean.co.uk  and was wandering if anyone can let me know if its ok or not or what I can improve on  (nice ones please).

Paul

[Kevin White]

To the point and tidy, like it.

You say you have 2 types of packages, 6 month or 12 month.

Do you offer a reduction for a longer commitment.

You pitch it as not tying people in but don,t state why 2 packages.

Regards
Kevin

[wilclean]

Hi Kevin

            The reason why I've got 2 packages, is because not many people want to go for more than a 1 years contract  -  besides some clients like to go for a month to month contract in which I'm trying to stay clear of, hence the 2 packages - but if they want more than a year I'll accept more in which I'll have to state that on my web site.

Cheers for the comment

Paul

[*Chris Browne]

Hi,
its pretty basic, but if it gets you work thats all that really matters (couple more pics and pages maybe?)

Chris

[heritagecleaning]

"you are" or "you're"

With the pic on the homepage, it's obvious that the right hand side is a board room but the left hand shot is far less clear. I got there in the end - it's a shopping centre. Not the best pic in my opinion though.


Owen

[wilclean]

Hi all


         Thanx for all your comments - looks like abit more tweaking.


Paul

[steve doyle]

Looks good,

One thing you might want to look at is the second paragraph (Both contracts are set up"). It reads alittle clumsy and might be better being re written.

something like;

Both our 6 and 12 month contracts offer our customers the security of a fixed term contract but without the long "tie in" some require.

Our new style of contracts are proving very popular as they allow our customers a greater control over the service they receive which is not possible with 2 or 3 year contracts.

Our contracts include all materials so there are no hidden costs. The price we quote is the price you pay*.

All our contracts can be renewed to ensure continuity in the service you receive.

*(vat?).

I havent spell checked it tho' its just a thought off the top of my head, you may do with it what you will, including binning it!


I would also change "looking for" to "accepting". looks alittle less deperate.


steve

[BDCS]

Hi
I liked the look of the website uncluttered and fresh looking which is great for a cleaning company. Just a few tips to help you get up the natural listings:
Your Meta tags need more- title for your home page should be more than 'home' it needs to describe your business in a short concise sentence. The keywords in the tags should be no more than 10 & relate to the content on your page and seperated by a comma and a space. Also the description needs something, again a couple of sentances.
Grammar is important as already mentioned. Content on the website needs more keywords without over doing it, think of what people will type into a search engine to find your services - e.g your first paragraph only mentions cleaning once. By all means have a sentance to  describe yourself and then write about  your services, short sharp paragraphs are best and then get more pages as already mentioned and go into greater detail.  My website has still got blank pages but google does like to see working progress!!
Hope that helps and don't forget a links page so that you can get on all of the free listings on directories!