[nevil]

Anyone of you more experienced guys fancy giving me a little feedback on my site.

I am not sure about all the intro on me, it spells out that I am a small independent on one hand, but on the other hand it gives customers or potential ones someone that is prepared to be accountable.

www.fresh-prop.co.uk

[Mike Osbourne]

Here's my two penneth.

My first impression is, well it's different.

And I think that's a good thing. I like your boxed statement for the demo and personally I would make this the main thing at the top. Like the logo but don't like the outline thing on the right.

Have you got a picture of you smiling?

[jeff1966]

Why use Extracta scrubba delux if you have the power of a truckmout?

[John Kelly]

Looks good apart from Begian Wilton photo doesn't really do anything, ie not much contrast in the photo. I think you would be better off with a really dirty plain carpet with a cleaned area really standing out.
The hard part of websites is getting them up the search engines.

[Tony Gill Carpet Smart]

Nevil.
I'm interested and i got BORED reading it. In my opinion you need to give it more impact.
and better pictures cheers m8 Tony

[Joe H]

You have a low moisture cleaning system but prefer the HWE............. well OK

but whos going to "buy" the LM system of clean

I wuold have been saying something like

I use a conventional hot water extraction machine which most carpet manufacturers prefer, and my truck mounted machine is extremely efficient.
However, clients who need their carpets to be dry very quickly, I can offer a safe but very efficient low moisture carpet cleaning system.

Generally, try to cut down on the words used to highlight something, but there is nothing wrong to repeat a feature you want to highlight.

Re Stain removal - I much prefer the term  stain treatment - cause as you know not every stain will remove but you can treat every stain with removal in mind.