[simonwonder]

hi guys and gals

looking for opinions and any criticism and comments for /against my new website
www.swindonswindowcleaner.com
now live
thanks
simon

[Walter Pole]

Hi Simon

My web design daughter suggest the following:

1. 5 different fonts on one page is difficult to appreciate.
2. Bullet points should be in a straight line, not centred
3. 2 different font colours?
4. Capital letters are associated with SHOUTING, great for forums not always for websites.
5.You are Swindons Window Cleaner but advertise carpet and vehicle cleaning, maybe a mixed message...although these are extra services maybe they should be under a separate section about other services on offer.

HTH
Mark .

[bluez]

I agree there are tooooo many fonts on the page.

I would put my phone number on the front page as well

[simonwonder]

thanks for your daughters assistance mark
respect
simon

[TennetClean]

No offense mate, but I think its a bit rubbish.

No images, and annoying blue text.  Not enough info, only 3 links, and 2 of them are for the same thing (contact) I dont think many customers will warm to it at all.

Sorry, you did ask for opinions.  I think you can do better

Mike

[simonwonder]

thanks for that mike all opinions welcome
we only went live today so time will tell
thanks anyway
simon

[jampot]

hi simon .it maybe not the best website that i have seen. but its a start and its got the basics on what you do. only time will tell.
good luck

[simonwonder]

thanks jampot
we are technophobic  so we are learning .
if we had no ideas we could not learn from them
if you make no mistakes how do you learn ?
you ask the questions for the advent of learning from others you have greater experience than you
you should learn something new everyday   
thanks for the comments
respect
simon

[dave0123]

I think diffrent colour text would be better for because your banner is also blue.

Pictures are a must i think!


Dave

[windowwashers]

Simon, your old site was better is my honest opinion, the fonts as said before are quite eye boggling, pic of clouds just looks like you stuck it in there because you could. One thing though it is better to have something than nothing so you are taking the right steps 

Ian

[xxmattyxx]

Hi Simon

My web design daughter suggest the following:

1. 5 different fonts on one page is difficult to appreciate.
2. Bullet points should be in a straight line, not centred
3. 2 different font colours?
4. Capital letters are associated with SHOUTING, great for forums not always for websites.
5.You are Swindons Window Cleaner but advertise carpet and vehicle cleaning, maybe a mixed message...although these are extra services maybe they should be under a separate section about other services on offer.

HTH
Mark .

All good points.

[Art]

Down the left hand side where the blank bit is i'd put a few pictures of what you do. A picture speaks a thousand words.

Put your contact numbers on the homepage.

Arthur

[mark dew]

I do like the clock ticking on the side. I saw another website with the days local weather forecast on a couple of lines and i thought that was a nice touch as well.

[simonwonder]

thanks mark
i think we have nearly cracked it now
not bad for a technophobe even if i say so myself
respect
simon

[tonylee]

hi simon
i like it. make mine that i did myself at christmas look quite bland
tony