[windowwashers]

having a complete redesign and any opinion is welcome.

Please find fault in my site...

One thing: the t&c page I already know about so no comments on that.
if replying to this please say the problem and where on the site it is on the site.
Some could say im crazy putting this post up and I know you lot can be like a pack of wolves sometimes lol
But negative comments I can turn into good in the end 
Your also welcome to put a nice comment if you want 

Here goes: www.windowwashers.co.uk

[Lizzy]

front page
All of our window cleaners are insured and saftey trained


about us
TO A INFORMATION (should be "to an information"

stopped reading after then...sorry.
I dont have a long attention span.  The few pages I read, repeated themselves alot but used different wording.

[Sanity]

Button entitled 'Make Money online'  Not very professional and leads to the T&C page.

Navigation at the bottom seems to be left alligned so all the buttons are cramped.  Maybe centre them?

Other than that nice adaptation of a template.  Looks great.

[windowwashers]

Button entitled 'Make Money online'  Not very professional and leads to the T&C page.

Navigation at the bottom seems to be left alligned so all the buttons are cramped.  Maybe centre them?

Other than that nice adaptation of a template.  Looks great.

thanks for the reply, the make money link is coming off asap the tandc was added last week as I stopped using the make money online page as it does not suit and does look unprofessional did do the job it was meant in the mean time though.

front page
All of our window cleaners are insured and saftey trained


about us
TO A INFORMATION (should be "to an information"


I dont have a long attention span.  The few pages I read, repeated themselves alot but used different wording.

all changed now thank you for that, wording is done that way for a reason but is noted. thank you for the comments 

[xpskwindowcleaning]

To me the FAQs sound a bit scary, with three questions talking about non-payment and collection agencies - surely just one quick sentence would do the trick.

[windowwashers]

To me the FAQs sound a bit scary, with three questions talking about non-payment and collection agencies - surely just one quick sentence would do the trick.

thats a good point lol, that is being changed as are the faqs but i know full well what you mean, I think i was having a bad day when i wrote them.

[DASERVICES]

No key words for search engines

Your words are in " description" ?

[windowwashers]

No key words for search engines

Your words are in " description" ?

I think you didnt read it correctly 

[Dean Aspects]

On the first page spelling mistakes

...with attention to detail on all aspects...
should it be in all aspects

..to do there job...
should be their job

alot not allot

just read the first page so far but as arnie said i'll be back

p.s its okay to use my business name on your website (first correction)

Dean

[Dean Aspects]

just read another couple of pages and there are a few typos and spelling mistakes this kind of thing would tend to put potential customers off as i think it looks unproffesional
Just my opinion no offence meant

Dean

[nat]

my thoughts are that immediatly that i get bored! sorry but there is just to much info thrown at me, i read a couple of lines then find myself scaning the rest, also why are you called Window Washers when you offer so many other services? no one will search your site other than looking for a window cleaner would they?

It all seems to much and pretty messy with the amount of info you have on their i would be inclined to simply it all to a much greater scale.

[Sanity]

Try to maybe use more images in the main body of the site?  It might mean less words and more interest kept...

[windowwashers]

my thoughts are that immediatly that i get bored! sorry but there is just to much info thrown at me, i read a couple of lines then find myself scaning the rest, also why are you called Window Washers when you offer so many other services? no one will search your site other than looking for a window cleaner would they?

It all seems to much and pretty messy with the amount of info you have on their i would be inclined to simply it all to a much greater scale.

Hi Nat, thanks for the reply sorry you get bored never had that from anyone yet, but is noted, We are called window washers as that is what we do for a living, the website design for others is a new venture as i get so many customers visiting my site asking for window cleaners in areas I do not yet cover, but this is going well as now I am adding areas. as for others searching my site one thing i do know is alot of window cleaners do visit my site so feedback on this is great negative or positive both are good for me 

THE WHOLE SITE IS BEING REDESIGNED I JUST HAVE TO GET WHATS THERE SORTED SO I CAN WORK ON THE NEW ONE.

On the first page spelling mistakes

...with attention to detail on all aspects...
should it be in all aspects

..to do there job...
should be their job

alot not allot

just read the first page so far but as arnie said i'll be back

p.s its okay to use my business name on your website (first correction)

Dean

CHEERS DEAN, all changed now, spell checker is a nightmare as it changes words like alot to allot etc, other typos are me (just cant read my own mistakes sometimes.

just read another couple of pages and there are a few typos and spelling mistakes this kind of thing would tend to put potential customers off as i think it looks unproffesional
Just my opinion no offence meant

Dean

Never had a problem with customers not calling me, most people scan a page and dont read word for word hence they will miss an odd typo and spelling mistake. typo's etc I cant see sometimes hence why i am asking on here for people to pick fault in my work.

I would not get offended Dean by any comment in a forum as it is your opinion and this is what I asked for. Mad some may think and clever to others, I think im a bit of both   :

[DASERVICES]

No key words for search engines

Your words are in " description" ?

I think you didnt read it correctly 

Spotted at the end of the title row, normally this would be a new line

[windowwashers]

No key words for search engines

Your words are in " description" ?

I think you didnt read it correctly 

Spotted at the end of the title row, normally this would be a new line

Normally? Who wants to be normal? I like to keep people on their or should it be there toes. 

129 views come on people im letting you slate me here and I will not offence to it either.  Take out your frustrations out on me and my site  I really dont mind    you never know it may every make you feel better  :

[jeff1]

No key words for search engines

Your words are in " description" ?

I think you didnt read it correctly 

Spotted at the end of the title row, normally this would be a new line

Normally? Who wants to be normal? I like to keep people on their or should it be there toes. 

129 views come on people im letting you slate me here and I will not offence to it either.  Take out your frustrations out on me and my site  I really dont mind    you never know it may every make you feel better  :

Its crap, unprofessional,totally cluttered with buttons, to many typo errors and threats of debt collectors, why not add we'll send in the baliffs or kick the crap out of you, if you don't pay??  Shall I go on.

I FEEL MUCH BETTER NOW!

[windowwashers]

No key words for search engines

Your words are in " description" ?

I think you didnt read it correctly 

Spotted at the end of the title row, normally this would be a new line

Normally? Who wants to be normal? I like to keep people on their or should it be there toes. 

129 views come on people im letting you slate me here and I will not offence to it either.  Take out your frustrations out on me and my site  I really dont mind    you never know it may every make you feel better  :

Its crap, unprofessional,totally cluttered with buttons, to many typo errors and threats of debt collectors, why not add we'll send in the baliffs or kick the crap out of you, if you don't pay??  Shall I go on.

I FEEL MUCH BETTER NOW!

good on you Jeff hope it made you feel better, you may want to look at the site before replying and commenting  and would love to look at your site crap is a little harsh dude, i do better than most online 

[Kwackers]

I think it looks pretty good, like people have said a few spelling mistakes, which have been corrected, looking good, i need one!

[jeff1]

No key words for search engines

Your words are in " description" ?

I think you didnt read it correctly 

Spotted at the end of the title row, normally this would be a new line

Normally? Who wants to be normal? I like to keep people on their or should it be there toes. 

129 views come on people im letting you slate me here and I will not offence to it either.  Take out your frustrations out on me and my site  I really dont mind    you never know it may every make you feel better  :

Its crap, unprofessional,totally cluttered with buttons, to many typo errors and threats of debt collectors, why not add we'll send in the baliffs or kick the crap out of you, if you don't pay??  Shall I go on.

I FEEL MUCH BETTER NOW!

good on you Jeff hope it made you feel better, you may want to look at the site before replying and commenting  and would love to look at your site crap is a little harsh dude, i do better than most online 

All Joking aside, I couldn't resist the temptation of your offer, you should make some sort of similar offer to your customers, you will have them rolling in.

Its has vastly improved from the last time I read it, and it is getting better every time.
Bear in mind, when you use a spell checker, they are mostly American spell checkers, and although most words are pronounced the same, the Americans spell them differently, Just be aware of this when you use them.

The guy's have already given you some excellent pointers, but one thing I would like to point out for you, is that useing full sentences with capital letters, be it on forums, websites or letters, it is classed as shouting.

I don't have a website but You have already seen my site?? Its not a website and I notice your already a member. If you have forgotten what it looks like? try the link again.

[jeff1]

Just noticed, someone stole my link, I'll have to check it out.