The one I dealt with, I emailed them what I wanted(in publisher but word would do) and they emialed back on a scudo plan what it would look like.
I went the other way, mine is like a newspaper.
However, my phone number is a lot larger than yours. I don't know what those numbers are because I am not local to you but I had my home phone large and mobile small on the back. Using call divert it gets through to you anyway and people trust imo landline more plus where I live recognise where you are from.
I think using your name -Barry - is very good and friendly, I would be tempted to put an area on. I have put a couple of benifits on the door. I also have web and email, and two catchy slogans.
Like I said mines like a newspaper.