[nathankaye]

[*Hector*]

I think you mean psychology 

the idea is sound enough, however you may wish to correct a lot of the English language and grammar mistakes before letting it loose on the public.... Even the Donny public may pick up on the mistakes 

 

[Mike Halliday]

The middle section is too long winded, and 'don't bin me' is not a  clear statement,  we know  straight away  what it means but imagine an OAP glancing at the leaflet.

I think it's using an idea that is not needed, do you really think people will bin  it, try other cleaners, then wish they had kept it ( I know you don't and it's reverse physiology )
using the points you make on the bottom of the leaflet I think it would make a fantastic leaflet based on the old and well used '5 reason ' technique  e.g.:

 5 secrets other window cleaners don't want you to know

5reason our customers recommend us to their closest friends

5 reason  your neighbours don't want you to read this leaflet

5 reason your home will fall in love with us.

This is my honest opinion, but I often find when people show examples like this they don't want honesty but praise for their great idea,  so to cover all bases...... BRILLIANT!! it's great, use it & become rich

[Slacky]

Firstly, it's psychology.

Second. Your use of english in the following section is atrocious, I wouldn't use it for that reason alone.




Change that, then give it a go, see how it pans out.

[Slacky]

I'd also change your web URL. It looks like your web address is www.inkservices.co.uk

[Stoots]

The idea is great. The wording and grammar let's it down.

I've noticed this with a lot of your stuff like your text messages, they are not worded very well.

Just my thoughts...

[nathankaye]

I think you mean psychology 

the idea is sound enough, however you may wish to correct a lot of the English language and grammar mistakes before letting it loose on the public.... Even the Donny public may pick up on the mistakes 

 

😂😂😂 part of that is the auto correct and not checking what ive typed! !

Glad i stuck it on here before i went ahead and ordered!!

[paul alan]

You should be getting some shut-eye!

[AuRavelling79]

Sorry to be blunt but here goes.

Good grief Nathan that is toe-curlingly bad. You really aren't going to use that are you?

[Dry Clean]

He's been going 14 years has bought two rounds and even though has never moved from being a one man operator needs
to order fliers, I would say it not his grammar that's the problem, did I mention he also does power washing.
Not trying to be rude but maybe if he stopped farting about and concentrated on doing a decent job the work would come to him.

[nathankaye]

Sorry to be blunt but here goes.

Good grief Nathan that is toe-curlingly bad. You really aren't going to use that are you?

Of course not!!  Glad someone realised it......
But at half 2 n sleep deprived it seemed a funny idea. But after a couple of hours sleep n at half eight in morning.......not so  much      😲😨😨😨

[nathankaye]

He's been going 14 years has bought two rounds and even though has never moved from being a one man operator needs
to order fliers, I would say it not his grammar that's the problem, did I mention he also does power washing.
Not trying to be rude but maybe if he stopped farting about and concentrated on doing a decent job the work would come to him.

😲😲😲