[HALTON]

for those that had view on my ideas thread
hows this looking is it ok

[chris turner]

Doesn't make sense to me mate.
Are you tired of dirty windows..
Embarrassing dirty windows..

Not only are you repeating yourself but you then have pictures of floors getting cleaned

[HALTON]

Sorry should of said pics are for illustration only.
What can I put instead of embarasing dirty windows ?
Thanks

[Don Kee]

Have a point about clean frames instead?

[supernova77]

This is what our leaflet looks like:





Andy

[HALTON]

How about i put embarrassing dirty windows in place of the top row dirty windows
and embarrassing dirty windows bottom row replace with unreliability?
also is there any thing else to point out in the text ?
Thanks

[supernova77]

How about i put embarrassing dirty windows in place of the top row dirty windows
and embarrassing dirty windows bottom row replace with unreliability?
also is there any thing else to point out in the text ?
Thanks

In my opinion you have too much on your leaflet... I would drop the "are you tired of" bit... It doesn't need to be on there.

Andy

[Rich Wilts]

Forget 'embarrassing',  I get what you're trying to say but trying to shame people into getting their windows cleaned isn't really kosher.

keep it simple. Less is more.  Let them know what you do and how to get hold of you. That's it.

[Rich Wilts]

Uniformed staff - not 'fully'

[HALTON]

Uniformed staff - not 'fully'

Thanks
so lets go

Are you tired of?
* Dirty windows
* Cleaning your own windows
* Substandard cleaning service
* Unreliability

Why chose us?
* Regular, reliable window cleaning service
* Professional and friendly service
* Uniformed staff
* Fully insured

And right hand colum as it is ??
Thanks guys

 

[Rich Wilts]

Right hand column I would change to normal type case and not uppercase.

The orange and white text in the middle about COMMERCIAL AND DOMESTIC ........... FOR PREMIER WINDOW CLEANING IN LEEDS ........... I would swap them around so the Orange text is below the White text.

[Rich Wilts]

Lose the semi colon in the white text at the end just prior to 'so you don't have to'. I would just have a horizontal slash there personally. Semi colons look crap on flyers I think.

[HALTON]

Right hand column I would change to normal type case and not uppercase.

The orange and white text in the middle about COMMERCIAL AND DOMESTIC ........... FOR PREMIER WINDOW CLEANING IN LEEDS ........... I would swap them around so the Orange text is below the White text.

Hi thanks
i did realise right colum was all capitals and was going to change it.
You lost me on the white /orange text in the middle i know were you mean but how do you mean to put it ?
Thanks

[Rich Wilts]

Just move all the Orange words to where the White text is and move the White text to where the Orange is.

[Rich Wilts]

[Rich Wilts]

If you have a look above your post theres a version now of the text swapped over.

[Rich Wilts]

Hows that?

[Rich Wilts]

Slightly altered position of text.

[Rich Wilts]

That

[HALTON]

That

PERFECT

is the text ok as its different sizes ?