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HALTON

Ideas Please
« on: July 08, 2015, 04:12:42 pm »

Here is my leaflet at the moment that i have designed.
I am wanting to keep this design as the front and am looking to get print on the back
Any ides of what to put was thinking payment options what else.
If anyone would like to share there leaflet please post it for ideas
Middle picture is to be improved before print
Thanks

robbo333

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Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #1 on: July 08, 2015, 04:42:31 pm »
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
"Thank you for calling: if you have a 1st floor flat, mid terraced house, lots of dogs, no parking, no side access, or no sense of humour, please press hold!
For all other enquiries, please press1"

8weekly

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #2 on: July 08, 2015, 04:52:25 pm »
Window Cleaning Service is too small. It should be the first thing to catch the eye.

HALTON

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #3 on: July 08, 2015, 04:54:01 pm »
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
hi
i did reply
thanks

HALTON

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #4 on: July 08, 2015, 05:02:17 pm »
Window Cleaning Service is too small. It should be the first thing to catch the eye.
thanks for info so how would you put this as you say its too small
if you was to alter it were and how would you put it?
Thanks

Jon_Phelps

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Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2015, 05:07:13 pm »
i posted one of my leaflets on a previous thread of yours as an example.

id remove the tag line "our business is cleaning your home or business"  as the word business has been repeated in one sentence.

try re-phrasing it. perhaps using residential and commercial.

Spacing on the telephone number - 0800  772  3638 or 08007  72  36  38 or 08007  723  638.  makes it easier to read

i wouldn't use stock images either.  put some of you working or perhaps your van etc?

its the little touches that make all the difference.

jon

HALTON

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #6 on: July 08, 2015, 05:15:49 pm »
i posted one of my leaflets on a previous thread of yours as an example.

id remove the tag line "our business is cleaning your home or business"  as the word business has been repeated in one sentence.

try re-phrasing it. perhaps using residential and commercial.

Spacing on the telephone number - 0800  772  3638 or 08007  72  36  38 or 08007  723  638.  makes it easier to read

i wouldn't use stock images either.  put some of you working or perhaps your van etc?

its the little touches that make all the difference.

jon
Hi
Yes i have taken your leaflet on board and was looking for some more ideas
Thanks

Pete Thompson

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Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #7 on: July 08, 2015, 05:40:44 pm »
Really nice leaflet

but...

The middle image belongs to ionics.

You can't use it if you don't have their permission.

Other than that, I think it's really good.

HALTON

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #8 on: July 08, 2015, 05:50:27 pm »
Really nice leaflet

but...

The middle image belongs to ionics.

You can't use it if you don't have their permission.

Other than that, I think it's really good.
Oh I didn't know that better change image before print then. :'(

robbo333

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Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #9 on: July 08, 2015, 06:44:33 pm »
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
hi
i did reply
thanks

Sorry mate I never got your reply.
Perhaps you could email me at probinsonstudio@gmail.com
Thanks
"Thank you for calling: if you have a 1st floor flat, mid terraced house, lots of dogs, no parking, no side access, or no sense of humour, please press hold!
For all other enquiries, please press1"

HALTON

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #10 on: July 08, 2015, 06:48:31 pm »
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
hi
i did reply
thanks

Sorry mate I never got your reply.
Perhaps you could email me at probinsonstudio@gmail.com
Thanks
that's the email i did send to.

8weekly

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #11 on: July 08, 2015, 06:55:30 pm »
Window Cleaning Service is too small. It should be the first thing to catch the eye.
thanks for info so how would you put this as you say its too small
if you was to alter it were and how would you put it?
Thanks

In place of your logo & company name.

ascjim

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #12 on: July 08, 2015, 07:00:16 pm »
Use your own pics

robbo333

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Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #13 on: July 08, 2015, 07:12:05 pm »
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
hi
i did reply
thanks

Sorry mate I never got your reply.
Perhaps you could email me at probinsonstudio@gmail.com
Thanks
that's the email i did send to.

Perhaps there was a problem. If you want to send it again that's great, if not no worries.
Cheers
Robbo
"Thank you for calling: if you have a 1st floor flat, mid terraced house, lots of dogs, no parking, no side access, or no sense of humour, please press hold!
For all other enquiries, please press1"

wpclean

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #14 on: July 08, 2015, 09:13:05 pm »
Lose the freephone number ( they just attract price shoppers ) Put a land line number, and print both sides, and whichever way it falls on the mat they will be dazzled by you snazzy  add !

wpclean

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #15 on: July 08, 2015, 09:14:39 pm »
Also make your name much smaller, and enlarge "window cleaning " so it stands out and they know straight away what you are offering.

HALTON

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #16 on: July 08, 2015, 09:18:14 pm »
Lose the freephone number ( they just attract price shoppers ) Put a land line number, and print both sides, and whichever way it falls on the mat they will be dazzled by you snazzy  add !
This is what i am saying i need ideas for the second side
As i like the front but maybe a few changes like live photos but bit hard as i work alone

wpclean

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #17 on: July 08, 2015, 10:32:34 pm »
You are over thinking it, double sided with a simple message does the trick . . . . .and expect a 0.5 return on a good day !

dazmond

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Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #18 on: July 09, 2015, 08:45:56 am »
id put pics of yourself cleaning windows instead of stock photos and one next to your van smiling with arms folded(poles left in the van!)

make the "window cleaning services" bigger and your name smaller

id also lose the freephone number and just put your mobile number

on the back id put a list of other services you offer(conny roofs,f/s/g and solar panel cleaning for example)
price higher/work harder!

HALTON

Re: Ideas Please
« Reply #19 on: July 09, 2015, 03:08:50 pm »
Hi guys
Thinking of getting a new flyer designed.
And was asked what text I wanted putting on it .
Can someone give me ideas
Thanks