[Art of Clean]

Hi All - Been a while since I was on here.

Just wondering if any of you use video and how it works for you.
I recently made this video and was wondering what I can do to improve it. I look forward to your thoughts.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cml3U4wKDRM

[Mike Halliday]

I think it was Good video, I would maybe have a before and after photo at the end and a few final words from you ( it finishes rather abruptly) you give an introduction I would give a final few words to balance it out

[derek west]

 

nice one pierre, all though i never watched your video. 

[Mike Halliday]

Are you suggesting pierre had  other  motives for posting that video and was not looking for constructive criticism on how to improve  it 

Trying to improve its ranking by getting views perhaps

[derek west]

educated guess.  yes thats what i'm suggesting    but i could be wrong.  apologies to pierre if i am wrong. no doubt he'll be back soon to reap all the constructive critisism and rebuff the cynisism 

[Kev Martin]

The problem is that it is easy to crticize.  That is not the best video I have seen but neither is it the worst.

1.  Areas being cleaned too big there needs to be more control.
2.  The driers needs to be deployed as they worked through each area after it had been cleaned not when it was being sealed.
3.  Too much hand work involved it should have all been done standing up with doodle bugs.
4.  You never pour sealer directly onto a floor.

I could go on but what's the point!!!!

Derek

Finally I totally agree with you he only ever seems to come on with stuff for sale and his posts have little or no real valuable contribution!  Better go and get me helmet and flak jacket