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H20cleaning

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i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« on: July 30, 2013, 11:42:24 am »
basically I have tried my hardest to draft a email to send out to company's etc.... I would appreciate some feedback both constructive and negative if needed.
Anyone who is willing to help could you write your email address and I will forward a copy for you to look over.
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Banbury Window Cleaning

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2013, 12:06:12 pm »
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Smudger

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2013, 12:06:26 pm »
i happily take a look for you -  pikachoo999@btinternet.com
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gordonswindows

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #3 on: July 30, 2013, 12:52:28 pm »
I will give it a look too gordon@ithastobegordons.co.uk
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Nathanael Jones

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #4 on: July 30, 2013, 01:23:43 pm »
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PoleKing

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #5 on: July 30, 2013, 01:46:35 pm »
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supernova77

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #6 on: July 30, 2013, 02:41:50 pm »
I don't think sending emails to companies is a good idea... A lot of them will just class it as spam and delete it...

Andy
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H20cleaning

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #7 on: July 30, 2013, 02:44:58 pm »
Quote from: Andy* on July 30, 2013, 02:41:50 pm
I don't think sending emails to companies is a good idea... A lot of them will just class it as spam and delete it...

Andy
well in that case I will set up a email were I can send it every few months.. one time im sure they will take interest! nothing to loose...
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H20cleaning

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #8 on: July 30, 2013, 03:18:56 pm »
I have emailed all people interested in helping... please don't laugh if its a pile of rubbish haha! ???
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R.W.C.S

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #9 on: July 30, 2013, 03:31:35 pm »
soseverton@gmail.com

I'll send you mine too, and we can compare :-)
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H20cleaning

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #10 on: July 30, 2013, 03:34:22 pm »
Quote from: R.W.C.S on July 30, 2013, 03:31:35 pm
soseverton@gmail.com

I'll send you mine too, and we can compare :-)
ive just sent it there mate
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Maris

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #11 on: July 30, 2013, 04:32:13 pm »
I'll be happy to give an opinion  mailmjt@yahoo.co.uk
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DB Cleaning Services

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #12 on: July 30, 2013, 04:42:22 pm »
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Dave.

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #13 on: July 30, 2013, 05:45:29 pm »
Could I take a look pls

info@silverleafcleaning.co.uk

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GAZZA B

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #14 on: July 30, 2013, 05:47:30 pm »
gary@gjbcleaning.co.uk

lets take a look

Gazza
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George P

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #15 on: July 30, 2013, 05:59:00 pm »
happy to have have a look and let you know, george@georgepowell.wanadoo.co.uk
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Tom White

Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #16 on: July 30, 2013, 06:58:58 pm »
I'm pretty sure it's illegal to 'mailshot' anyone/businesses at random using e-mail.  You only can do this if you have some kind of business connection to them in the first place.

I'm more than 'pretty sure' to be honest.

I doubt anyone would get annoyed enough to prosecute a window cleaner doing this, but I'm just saying it's illegal.  I've done things that are illegal or unlawful (not sure which).  I think I drove at 31 mph in a 30 mph zone today.

P.S. The difference between illegal and unlawful is that one is against the law, and the other is a sick bird.
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Archer

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #17 on: July 30, 2013, 07:10:21 pm »

Hi,

Please send to me and I will take a look

archerwindowcleaning@yahoo.co.uk
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stuart mc

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Re: i have put together a commercial email... im wanting peoples opinions
« Reply #18 on: July 30, 2013, 07:13:45 pm »
Quote from: Tosh on July 30, 2013, 06:58:58 pm
I'm pretty sure it's illegal to 'mailshot' anyone/businesses at random using e-mail.  You only can do this if you have some kind of business connection to them in the first place.

I'm more than 'pretty sure' to be honest.

I doubt anyone would get annoyed enough to prosecute a window cleaner doing this, but I'm just saying it's illegal.  I've done things that are illegal or unlawful (not sure which).  I think I drove at 31 mph in a 30 mph zone today.

P.S. The difference between illegal and unlawful is that one is against the law, and the other is a sick bird.

it is not unlawful if it is B2B but there are rules, no idea what they are though
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