[Carl@Cwc]

any help appreciated please

[Scrimble]

you dont need 2 lots of phone numbers on the side of the van, and whats the point in putting police crb checked?

[Carl@Cwc]

you dont need 2 lots of phone numbers on the side of the van, and whats the point in putting police crb checked?

That's why I asked opinions m8

[R.W.C.S]

Don't need an apostrophe in patios either do you?

[Grammar police]

[wpclean]

you dont need 2 lots of phone numbers on the side of the van, and whats the point in putting police crb checked?

Some people prefer calling mobiles, some like calling land lines !

[Lee GLS]

you dont need 2 lots of phone numbers on the side of the van, and whats the point in putting police crb checked?

Some people prefer calling mobiles, some like calling land lines !

I think he means that the landline and mobile have been out twice on the side of the van

[Rob Knapman]

you dont need 2 lots of phone numbers on the side of the van, and whats the point in putting police crb checked?

Some people prefer calling mobiles, some like calling land lines !

But both numbers are on there twice...

[lal]

Hi Carl, i think that the signwriting looks very good, but i would only have one set of contact numbers on each
side of the van, i would all so get rid of the police crb checked writing,

Regards

lal

[Rayleigh Window Cleaning Services]

Alright mate, my honest opinion is it looks at bit too busy. Simplify.

Steve

[wayupnorth]

I like it, just drop the telephone numbers being on there twice, sort the grammar and its a winner imo

[Paul H]

I like it, just drop the telephone numbers being on there twice, sort the grammar and its a winner imo

Like the rest phone numbers twice no point crb checked etc..

On the side have Cannock centred above windiw cleaning then you may be able to get your drop in

              (Drop)CANNOCK
              WINDOW CLEANING (this need to be a big as poss)

Then by ditching the number on the side you could keep domestic commercial under this ...

Hope that helps

[Carl@Cwc]

this any better?

[MATT BATEMAN (OWC)]

Alright mate, my honest opinion is it looks at bit too busy. Simplify.

Steve

Too many fonts.

[EandM]

I like it.

[andyM]

I like it.

+1
Good to see that your trade (Window Cleaning) is prominent and clear.
Looks great. 

[lal]

One Hundred Percent better 

Regards
lal

[Paul H]

this any better?

Just I suggested.. much better and ask yourself do you really need anymore??

like someone else stated make sure the font is the same throughout and everything is nice and uniform (centred etc..)

now listen for the phone ringing!

[p1w1]

i think its fine although for me i would def have the web address higher up on the side of the van as at the bottom its harder to see and will get covered in dirt easier, for me a web address is the first thing i look for when i want to remember how to contact somebody a lot easier then remebering telephone numbers..

[Paul H]

i think its fine although for me i would def have the web address higher up on the side of the van as at the bottom its harder to see and will get covered in dirt easier, for me a web address is the first thing i look for when i want to remember how to contact somebody a lot easier then remebering telephone numbers..
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so long as they remember Cannock window cleaning that's all that matters ... Google the name ... And bingo .... So sometimes you don't really need the web address to be prominent ...

Just my opinion ..

[CLEANCARE WC]

I would lose the (&) from fully insured and crb checked. I would keep the crb checked though it may set you apart from others and that is after all why yoy had it done. Agree about losing one set of numbers