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MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Opinons on sign-writing please
« on: April 13, 2013, 10:01:06 pm »




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deeege

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2013, 10:10:28 pm »
I'd just change the wording around slightly.

Rear arch: public liability insurance Fully Insured

Side: Oakley Window Cleaning
         Commercial and Residential Window Cleaning

Side: We also clean:-
         Solar Panels
         Fascias and Soffits
         And Gutters

Tidy and easy on the eye though, I like it.
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luther1

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2013, 10:14:15 pm »
Looks nice. What deeege said but fascias,soffits and gutters
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MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2013, 10:16:04 pm »


I changed the insurance bit on the rear wheel arch but it looked silly actually so left it as it is, changed the rest.

 ;D
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luther1

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2013, 10:17:40 pm »
I think it would look better without 'window cleaning' on the second line Matt. Just 'res and comm'
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MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2013, 10:18:00 pm »



 ;D
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deeege

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2013, 10:18:46 pm »
I would also drop the 'window cleaning' after 'commercial and residential' on the side because you're repeating it. Just my opinion to make it easier to read. :)
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"....and it's lend me ten pounds, I'll buy you a drink, and mother wake me early in the morning."

MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2013, 10:19:36 pm »
You boys!! lol

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deeege

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #8 on: April 13, 2013, 10:20:45 pm »
That was quick! Only a small change but looks much better!
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"....and it's lend me ten pounds, I'll buy you a drink, and mother wake me early in the morning."

MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2013, 10:21:03 pm »
Quote from: deeege on April 13, 2013, 10:20:45 pm
looks much better!

That last one?
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luther1

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #10 on: April 13, 2013, 10:24:13 pm »
Yes but not & and 'and' on the fascia bit. A comma I think,then and
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MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #11 on: April 13, 2013, 10:26:25 pm »
It all gets a bit anal in the end doesn't it lol
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CLEANCARE WC

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #12 on: April 13, 2013, 10:26:59 pm »
Quote from: luther1 on April 13, 2013, 10:14:15 pm
Looks nice. What deeege said but fascias,soffits and gutters

+1
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will77

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #13 on: April 13, 2013, 10:30:26 pm »
with the phone numbers i would take out the words office and mobile. no need for em. reduces clutter
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MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #14 on: April 13, 2013, 10:31:20 pm »
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Gav Camm lammy 283

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #15 on: April 13, 2013, 10:32:49 pm »
Yeah looks spot on
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luther1

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #16 on: April 13, 2013, 10:33:29 pm »
Yes. Looks great. Lovely van too. Are you getting it in black Matt?
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MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #17 on: April 13, 2013, 10:33:36 pm »
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MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #18 on: April 13, 2013, 10:34:02 pm »
It is in black yes. Its the bees ferking bollox mate  ;D
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MATT BATEMAN (OWC)

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Re: Opinons on sign-writing please
« Reply #19 on: April 13, 2013, 10:35:47 pm »
Quote from: Gav Camm lammy 283 on April 13, 2013, 10:32:49 pm
Yeah looks spot on

Looks better than your bretta  ;D
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