[STEVE-UK]

www.southernwindowcleaningltd.co.uk

gone for a new look....what do you guys think?

[ottra]

Just a few things mate the abseiling has no tools or doing anything.
And i would shorten your email to SWC like me my one was way to long
offthetopropeaccess no its OTTRA

[Richard iSparkle]

www.southernwindowcleaningltd.co.uk

gone for a new look....what do you guys think?

It looks very very good.  Well done.  I can see a lot of work has gone into it.  Gives me food for thought for my commercial advertising too.

[EandM]

Very good, very smart looking site.

Just a few thoughts;


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These are only my thoughts - it's still very good.

[Frankybadboy]

like

[g.brookes]

thats an excellent site.

[windiewasher]

Thats a top website!

[Klean07]

Top site except for your spelling of the word courtesy!

http://www.ask.com/answers/108219641/what-is-courtesy

[spudd]

Nice site Steve, looks fresh.

Hope all is good your end..

[steve123]

Nice site, did you build it yourself? if so what did you use?

[STEVE-UK]

Thanks for the feedback chaps

will have to change that spelling mistake

I had a company make it up for me, the software used to design is Wordpress

Spikey...doing well thanks mate how about you?

[shina]

Thanks for the feedback chaps

will have to change that spelling mistake

I had a company make it up for me, the software used to design is Wordpress

Spikey...doing well thanks mate how about you?

How much would a web site like that cost?

[STEVE-UK]

this one cost me a grand to have made

[Nathanael Jones]

this one cost me a grand to have made

A grand?!!! Don't get me wrong, its a nice looking site (In fact I'm building one for a guy now who said he likes the way yours looks)

I was keeping quiet because i thought you'd built it yourself,.. and even for a semi-pro job its good - but its not worth a grand!

1.There are no meta keyword tags (not as important as they used to be - but still shouldn't be ignored)

2. The header includes Flash animation - fine a couple of years ago, but there are compatibility issues with some smartphones & tablets, so its not often used any more.

3. Your page titles are vital to SEO - listing the areas you work in & the services you offer in the page titles is essential.

4. The site is too wordy - no one will read all of that text. Keep it simple & to the point.

5. You don't need a blog page - integration with your facebook business page would be better for SEO

6. The maps on each area page are different - a site should be made to look as uniform as possible.

7. The whole site needs looking at by a proof reader - minor spelling & grammar errors give a bad impression thats easily avoided.


Sorry, I know that list sounds a bit harsh, but if you're paying big money you should be getting top results! You've a lot of pages on the site, so it's going to cost - but I would have thought £600 max personally.

[EandM]

this one cost me a grand to have made

A grand?!!! Don't get me wrong, its a nice looking site (In fact I'm building one for a guy now who said he likes the way yours looks)

I was keeping quiet because i thought you'd built it yourself,.. and even for a semi-pro job its good - but its not worth a grand!

1.There are no meta keyword tags (not as important as they used to be - but still shouldn't be ignored)

2. The header includes Flash animation - fine a couple of years ago, but there are compatibility issues with some smartphones & tablets, so its not often used any more.

3. Your page titles are vital to SEO - listing the areas you work in & the services you offer in the page titles is essential.

4. The site is too wordy - no one will read all of that text. Keep it simple & to the point.

5. You don't need a blog page - integration with your facebook business page would be better for SEO

6. The maps on each area page are different - a site should be made to look as uniform as possible.

7. The whole site needs looking at by a proof reader - minor spelling & grammar errors give a bad impression thats easily avoided.


Sorry, I know that list sounds a bit harsh, but if you're paying big money you should be getting top results! You've a lot of pages on the site, so it's going to cost - but I would have thought £600 max personally.

I clearly don't know as much about website design as Nathanael Jones but he makes some very valid points about cost and overall result.
I don't possess a degree in English but what stands out to me is the phraseology.
The writing style doesn't flow well, relying on many small words that seem to elongate a sentence whereas a few longer and more descriptive words would convey the point more effectively. If you were a little company covering a small area I'm sure all would be satisfactory. However, looking at your coverage map I'd be concerned that the native text doesn't portray your company in the best possible light. For a £1,000 I too would expect someone to have proof read the text and reviewed the syntax thoroughly.

All that said, it's a good looking site that needs a few tweaks rather than an overhaul.

[STEVE-UK]

Thanks chaps, Will be having words the company that built it, I will let you know there response

[STEVE-UK]

Nathanael...Would you expect it to be proof read for the price i paid?

[NJones]

Yes,... Proof reading should be included as standard - its vital to your business presentation, so needs to be spot on.

I just noticed that the site isn't responsive to different screen sizes either, which should also be standard at that price, especially as its so easy to do in Wordpress.

[Nathanael Jones]

Yes,... Proof reading should be included as standard - its vital to your business presentation, so needs to be spot on.

I just noticed that the site isn't responsive to different screen sizes either, which should also be standard at that price, especially as its so easy to do in Wordpress.

Sorry, just realised my phone logs on with the wrong account - the above comment is still me though!

[robbo333]

Sorry to be negative, but i have to agree with NJ.

I think it's a lot of dosh for what you've got.

Have a chat with your web designers and get it sorted.