Mate, please don't take this to heart, I'm just trying to offer some constructive criticism for you.
Had a quick squiz at your main page and this is what stood out like doggies to me::
Based on the Fylde Coast, We are a Small Family Run Business Specialising in Low Moisture Cleaning of Carpet's. Using Woolsafe Approved Chemicals we can Safely Clean, Deoderise, Stain Block and Heat dry all types of Natural and Synthetic Floor Coverings. Carpets can be walked on immediately and are fully Dry in 30mins GUARANTEED.
Use caps ONLY at the beginning of a sentence, or for emphasis on a particular point.
Use spell check.
Instead of this:
Carpet Cleaning in the Home. (Fleetwood , Thornton, Cleveley's, Blackpool, Poulton, Fylde Coast)
Sofa Cleaning in the Home. (Fleetwood , Thornton, Cleveley's, Blackpool, Poulton Fylde Coast)
Leather Cleaning in the home. (Fleetwood , Thornton, Cleveley's, Blackpool, Poulton, Fylde Coast)
We NOW even offer a Gutter Vacuuming Service.
Please click Gutter Vacuuming at top right corner of page.
(Fleetwood , Thornton, Cleveley's, Blackpool, Poulton, Fylde Coast)
Try this:
Call us for carpet, sofa and leather cleaning in the home in:
Fleetwood , Thornton, Cleveley's, Blackpool, Poulton, Fylde Coast
We now also offer a Gutter Vacuuming Service.
Please click Gutter Vacuuming at top right corner of page.
Now for the nitty gritty:
We also offer are services to the commercial sector and have different chemicals for different enviroments.
Spellcheck again
Restore (heavy soil breaker for pub's and Clubs etc).
Pure Fusion (no perfumes,anti static for office's and call centre's etc).
Spacing between words, upper caps, plus who knows what you are talking about except maybe a carpet cleaner.?
Bactoshield (kills MRSA, E-COLI, STAPH AUREUS, AMMONIA and Pet smells perfect for Healthcare and Sporting Facilities).
Chewing Gum removal.
Again, lower text + grammar for both the above lines, also don’t forget the commas when required. Also be very careful with what you say, such as "Bactoshield kills ammonia".
(1) Many people object to the word "kills".
(2) Where, on the Dry Fusion site does it say that "Bactoshield kills ammonia.?
Food for thought.
I love the English language, and I believe that many that speak English would possibly reject your services purely because of the way your site is written.
Like I said, this is only meant to help you, not blast you.
I wish you well in your ventures, and one way to get positive results is to throw your ideas, (ie; your web site) out for constructive criticism, and let your peers tell you what they think would help you better.
Cheers mate,
Shorty.
