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Granny

  • Posts: 824
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2012, 07:52:04 am »
Not bad what program did you use?
Not too sure about the photo with the Tattoos though.
G.

EandM

  • Posts: 2199
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #2 on: July 09, 2012, 08:28:53 am »
Good choice of words - meticulous works well.
Like the proper use of the term ' fuel station ' rather than the usual incorrect ' petrol station '.
Like the way that you've divided up the phone and bank numbers to make them easier to assimilate.
Like the slideshow while you're reading as it reinforces the point subconsciously.

Only iffy bit, as already said, are the tattoos.

I wouldn't make adverse judgement about you because I don't you but some potential customers might.

Very good then that it includes testimonials from the existing customers mentioning ' friendly and polite '.

I like it and think it's very good  

Richard iSparkle

  • Posts: 2491
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2012, 08:35:04 am »
looks fine.

i like the ling to freeindex reviews, tho just to warn you, we have had a bad review on their ourselves by a person with a made up name, and freeindex point bank refuse to remove it, despite their policy on reviewers having to use their real name!  really frustrating!  >:(
iSparkle Window Cleaning

www.isparklewindowcleaning.uk

steveo22

  • Posts: 330
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #4 on: July 09, 2012, 08:41:57 am »
Not bad what program did you use?
Not too sure about the photo with the Tattoos though.
G.
It's done via Moonfruit, only thing that has cost me is the domain name

H S and Son

Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #5 on: July 09, 2012, 08:42:52 am »
Looks good. Like it.

steveo22

  • Posts: 330
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #6 on: July 09, 2012, 08:43:12 am »
Good choice of words - meticulous works well.
Like the proper use of the term ' fuel station ' rather than the usual incorrect ' petrol station '.
Like the way that you've divided up the phone and bank numbers to make them easier to assimilate.
Like the slideshow while you're reading as it reinforces the point subconsciously.

Only iffy bit, as already said, are the tattoos.

I wouldn't make adverse judgement about you because I don't you but some potential customers might.

Very good then that it includes testimonials from the existing customers mentioning ' friendly and polite '.

I like it and think it's very good  
Point taken about the Tattoos, thanks for the positive comments :)

steveo22

  • Posts: 330
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #7 on: July 09, 2012, 08:44:38 am »
looks fine.

i like the ling to freeindex reviews, tho just to warn you, we have had a bad review on their ourselves by a person with a made up name, and freeindex point bank refuse to remove it, despite their policy on reviewers having to use their real name!  really frustrating!  >:(
Thats a bit dodgy then, suppose you have no control over who posts, could be a vendetta from another window cleaner??


steveo22

  • Posts: 330
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #9 on: July 09, 2012, 08:47:10 am »
I'm looking to get a logo made up now and applied, as I think the current title is very appealing commercially, also will gradually get some better quality pics with  signwritten workwear

Jay JCS

  • Posts: 21
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #10 on: July 09, 2012, 08:51:59 am »

Just had a brief look and it looks fine!  8)

I wouldn't publish my banks details online personally.  Probably a small risk, but a risk nonetheless. 
(see this link for why there is a risk)

Also, you need to spell check your text..

But all in all, looks like it will do its job!



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Nathanael Jones

  • Posts: 5596
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #11 on: July 09, 2012, 08:57:34 am »
Looks good - but you need to separate your meta keywords with comma's.  ;)

Window Washers

  • Posts: 9036
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #12 on: July 09, 2012, 10:10:45 am »

Just had a brief look and it looks fine!  8)

I wouldn't publish my banks details online personally.  Probably a small risk, but a risk nonetheless. 
(see this link for why there is a risk)

Also, you need to spell check your text..

But all in all, looks like it will do its job!



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if it is a business account the details are useless to crooks as you need a little calculator type machine to do anything online and verify the transactions. if it is a personal account I would agree with you.

Site looks good, someones already said about the tattoo in the picture some people don;t like them and think they are thuggish so off putting, I personally Like tattoo's but broad market gives wrong impression.

if you can set up a forwarder email on your domain whatever@s-coxwindowcleaning.co.uk and put that on the site instead of @gmail.com it gives a better impression.

now all you need to do is fill the site with a few more pages (4 more) and jobs a good'en   ;D

Nice clean and uncluttered
If your not willing to learn, No one can help you, If you are determined to learn, No one can stop you ;)

steveo22

  • Posts: 330
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #13 on: July 09, 2012, 06:31:44 pm »
Looks good - but you need to separate your meta keywords with comma's.  ;)
Separate each word or phrase?? Window cleaning Worcester or Window, Cleaning, Worcester? ???

H S and Son

Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #14 on: July 09, 2012, 06:33:33 pm »
Window cleaning Worcester,  Window, Cleaning, Worcester window cleaner, waterfed-pole, window-washer in worcester

Separate each word or phrase with a comma

steveo22

  • Posts: 330
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #15 on: July 09, 2012, 06:41:59 pm »
Window cleaning Worcester,  Window, Cleaning, Worcester window cleaner, waterfed-pole, window-washer in worcester

Separate each word or phrase with a comma
Thanks Matt

bobby p

Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #16 on: July 09, 2012, 10:05:52 pm »
looks fine.

i like the ling to freeindex reviews, tho just to warn you, we have had a bad review on their ourselves by a person with a made up name, and freeindex point bank refuse to remove it, despite their policy on reviewers having to use their real name!  really frustrating!  >:(
 Whats it say? i read somewhere that if you reply to a bad review explaining you have never had that person as a genuine customer it will look good for you

steveo22

  • Posts: 330
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #17 on: July 09, 2012, 10:07:39 pm »

Just had a brief look and it looks fine!  8)

I wouldn't publish my banks details online personally.  Probably a small risk, but a risk nonetheless. 
(see this link for why there is a risk)

Also, you need to spell check your text..

But all in all, looks like it will do its job!



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if it is a business account the details are useless to crooks as you need a little calculator type machine to do anything online and verify the transactions. if it is a personal account I would agree with you.

Site looks good, someones already said about the tattoo in the picture some people don;t like them and think they are thuggish so off putting, I personally Like tattoo's but broad market gives wrong impression.

if you can set up a forwarder email on your domain whatever@s-coxwindowcleaning.co.uk and put that on the site instead of @gmail.com it gives a better impression. Not too sure how to do this?

now all you need to do is fill the site with a few more pages (4 more) and jobs a good'en   ;D

Nice clean and uncluttered
Tried to set up the email address as a link but not had any luck?!

Richard iSparkle

  • Posts: 2491
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #18 on: July 09, 2012, 11:29:52 pm »
looks fine.

i like the ling to freeindex reviews, tho just to warn you, we have had a bad review on their ourselves by a person with a made up name, and freeindex point bank refuse to remove it, despite their policy on reviewers having to use their real name!  really frustrating!  >:(
 Whats it say? i read somewhere that if you reply to a bad review explaining you have never had that person as a genuine customer it will look good for you

it says something like we charged them £25 pound and did a bad job, then they got 'reach2clean' and he was cheaper and much better...  does sound suspicious.  i have blocked all our reviews on there now, but its a shame
iSparkle Window Cleaning

www.isparklewindowcleaning.uk

steveo22

  • Posts: 330
Re: Home Made Website - Comments?
« Reply #19 on: July 10, 2012, 06:19:29 pm »
So does anyone get many jobs off their website? If so what sort of traffic do you get weekly??