[Erithwc]

Im getting 5000 done next week what do you think on the flyer im trying to improve on the results i already get.

Im not sure if the van in the background is a good idea or not whats your thoughts.

Thanks Paul

[steven ainger]

Competive

[Erithwc]

Competive

opps time for another coffee i think 

[brianbarber]

Don't mention prices at all,
Saying competitive you will possible get a lot of pice shoppers
Just my take on it.


Mr B

[martinw]

what about reasonable prices  instead of competetive or no prices

[idealrob]

Headline is everything, put name at the bottom, and a picture writes a thousand words. I would use your facebook pictures, they look good & modern

idealrob

[rosskesava]

It should read 'Regular service all year round'.

Also, not 'we can clean hard to reach windows' but 'we also clean hard to reach windows'.

The capital 'C' in the third line isn't needed. It looks a bit odd.

Yeah, I know, I'm being picky.

Nice simple layout & looks good.

[richard jagger]

instead of competetive or no prices/ put affordable pricing.

[Smudger]

personally i'd lose the top line - make no ref. to prices at all that way the leaflet is more flexable in respect of being
posted to all types of property ( large places may not call if you come across as just cheap )

and reduce the company name by half and increase the title size - possibly move the co. name to the bottom.

but a very nice effort overall

Darran

[Erithwc]

Thanks for all the replys this designs is only for next 5000 after that I want to get my next leaflets done by a women with the womens touch after all my target market is women 

Thanks Paul

[Ian101]

I have just ordered 5000 leaflets and mine says "Do you need a reliable Window Cleaner ?"

Maybe u want to stick a reliable or professional in before window cleaner.

Just hope trading standards dont get me for my "reliable" bit 

[Tom White]

Yeah, I know, I'm being picky.

Being picky is important; the leaflet is the 'first impression' and first impressions count.

[Window Washers]

I would remove the drop shadow on your name, 2 things my eyes are focused on are erith and pay

[Erithwc]

Thanks for the replys I'm going to change the main text but not sure on how to word it correctly help please  

The text im going to change to is :

We are taking on more customers in your street
providing a regular five or ten weekly
all year round window cleaning service
frames & sills cleaned every time
Plus we also clean hard to reach windows
Online payments accepted via

Thanks Paul

[Roy Cauldery]

Like the look of it Paul
Very eye catching and direct - what more do you want from a leaflet?
does what it says on the tin
Look forward to the final draft

Regards
Roy

[Nick Wareham]

You need PICTURES!

People look at something for only a few seconds while deciding whether or not its bin-worthy.

You have to get your message across fast, and that means pictures.  They have to be able to tell at a glance what it is about.

I'll see if I have one of mine around to post, I had good pics and the result was very good.

[Erithwc]

I think this is ok for now it's not the best in the world but need more leaflets asap

Regards Paul

[p1w1]

think it looks fine, as for pictures to show what it is your doing if the customer cant work it out from "need a window cleaner" then theres no hope for them anyway   

[Paul H]

I can paffle on too much with design etc.. just say what you do and want to get across

I would though consider bullet pointing the lines and set them all left and start each line with a capital (check the one beginning round mate!)

Paul

[Window Washers]

what about changing the top part to, We already clean in this street