Yes, I really liked it, Lee. Well done, mate. If I can make some constructive criticism, sometimes your grammar lets you down and readers will 'stumble' over a sentence - this is nothing major - and it's not like mine is brilliant either.
So if you could find someone with top English skills to proof read your stuff and make amendments; that would be great.
Gold is pretty good at this sort of thing, if you could get him on board?
But overall I'll give it a critical eight-out-of-ten.
Well done.