[the red carpet]

hi have just about finished making my first basic website its now online please take a look and tell me what you think www.vipcarpetcleaningessex.comhttp://

[John Kelly]

Not bad for a first attempt. The home page has a lot of black text against a white background, also a lot of white space, hard on the eyes. Like the cleaning photo should impress a few custies, Can't think why you would want to put other local carpet cleaners on your website though.

[the red carpet]

thanks for your comments john.
i take it your talking about the links page, its not for other carpet cleaners dont worry im not that mad its just i have a few friends in the cleaning buisness doing oven cleaning, car valeting, maid service etc. and this is just to help them out as we all try and recomend each other to our customers.

[daniel b]

Your site looks good, just a little spelling mistake which is the word GUARANTEED on your home page.


Daniel

[neil 47]

This is one of the best websites I,ve seen ,packs in alot of information
http://www.cleaningdoctor.net/services.html
Neil 

[ValueValeting]

Your site looks good, just a little spelling mistake which is the word GUARANTEED on your home page.


Daniel

And Hemel

Phil

[terryhealy]

ok mr v.i.p wot about your friend T.H in the window cleaning and cleaning trade wot happend to his link  he is very upset now especially as he advertises your trade on his business card .

[the red carpet]

morning mate dont worry your gonna be included