[Frankybadboy]

http://www.radisol.co.uk/window-cleaners-cleaning/water-fed-pole.htm


hes a bit shy to put it up but would like your comments.


go esy on him please.

[cleaners are us]

basic but to the point

[mci services]

I like it, nice and simple like Trippy

[Frankybadboy]

I like it, nice and simple like Trippy

stu what you trying to say that trips is really that simple.

[CLEANCARE WC]

its good way better than mine i dont have one, i really need to get with the times. but i like it trippy

[mci services]

I like it, nice and simple like Trippy

stu what you trying to say that trips is really that simple.

you said it

I actually like it to be honest, I think I would drop the sentence that states windows stay cleaner for longer though

[Richard Neal]

Looks good to me i like the before and after pics

[cleaner-exteriors]

i would buy the domain name or upgrade rather than having the Radisol name

[bobplum]

get rid of paragraph 5,think about it
bob

[bad trippy]

i would buy the domain name or upgrade rather than having the Radisol name

The domain name will be added hopefully tomorrow, the website is not live at the mo, again hopefully tomorrow

[groundhog]

I like it, but make your phone number more prominent!!

[bad trippy]

get rid of paragraph 5,think about it
bob

paragraph 5 is a selling point of wfp and it sets it apart from trad.
Ive lost count of the times ive nicked work off a trad guy and charged double!
In some cases i even urge prospective custys to choose 8 weekly over 4 weekly, i say "some" meaning prices over £10 or £12
Some say no, and insist on 4 weekly which is fine by me, but at least iam trying to show ppl the diff between wfp and trad, and all of the benefits of wfp over trad

[Tom White]

I don't like it.  I'm being honest here.  Sorry Trippy.  

I think it sounds insecure; almost like trying to justify the method you work.

I put this link up in another post because I really like this website, but I now know why I like it:

http://www.seanbrennanwindowcleaning.co.uk/index.html

There's no flannel, it states exactly what's on offer and most of all it sounds confident.

[Matt Gibson]

Im not a window cleaner so not gonna comment on the content, but it looks to me lke there is some text missing, or covered over, poking out just underneath where your phone number is, and if you hover your mouse over it, it becomes clickable.

[Steve@Wrights]

I put this link up in another post because I really like this website, but I now know why I like it:
http://www.seanbrennanwindowcleaning.co.uk/index.html
There's no flannel, it states exactly what's on offer and most of all it sounds confident.

Although sadly its a terrible looking site, which "punchy" to the point content doesn't make up for imo.

I like the Clear View websites clean appeal, pardon the pun, although perhaps the "flannel" could be toned down a bit and the use of bullet points made more prominent than paragraphs of text people are very unlikely to read.

[rob thomas]

Hope the leaflets have been sooooorrrrrrttttttteeeeeedddddd out!!!!!!!!!!!
 

[idealrob]

I like paragraph 5, and its true, windows do stay cleaners longer, unless as happens often, birds fly into them.
Keep paragraph 5

idealrob

[SherwoodCleaningSe]

It looks ok, but change the phone number to a different colour, I struggle to see the grey.

[Tom White]

I like paragraph 5, and its true, windows do stay cleaners longer, unless as happens often, birds fly into them.
Keep paragraph 5

idealrob

I don't think they do stay cleaner for longer.  I'm sure Malc Gold did an experiment on his own house where in one window he cleaned one pane trad, one pain WFP, and left the other pane as a control.

And the result was that the two differently cleaned windows got dirty at the same rate.

And it just sounds like more flannel to me.  If a potential customer suspects you're 'leading them a line', maybe they'll distrust other aspects about you?

[bad trippy]

I like paragraph 5, and its true, windows do stay cleaners longer, unless as happens often, birds fly into them.
Keep paragraph 5

idealrob

I don't think they do stay cleaner for longer.  I'm sure Malc Gold did an experiment on his own house where in one window he cleaned one pane trad, one pain WFP, and left the other pane as a control.

And the result was that the two differently cleaned windows got dirty at the same rate.

And it just sounds like more flannel to me.  If a potential customer suspects you're 'leading them a line', maybe they'll distrust other aspects about you?

Tosh i was trad for 14 yrs, wfp for 18 months, and can say 1000% that the use of pure water keeps the glass cleaner for longer. Look at the Ioincs bumph and they openly say the same thing also. I think its a selling point, and on a personal note i would rather pick up a new custy for £12 bi monthly than the same custy £10 monthly, the extra dough stacks up mate, all be it you need more custys. Also the more custys you have the less of a dent it makes when one or two drop out, also the more custys you have will increase the chances of picking up even more! sorry i went a bit off topic there lol