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Halfadaylee

  • Posts: 625
Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #20 on: March 22, 2012, 02:55:46 pm »
I think this is ok for now it's not the best in the world but need more leaflets asap ;D ;D

Regards Paul



I like it.
Art

rosskesava

  • Posts: 17015
Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #21 on: March 22, 2012, 05:52:33 pm »
Arghhhh.

'We are taking on more customers in your street'...............................

Please, go back to the original the above is a mess of muddled words.

Sorry to be blunt.
Just chant..... Hare Krsna, Hare Krsna, Krsna Krsna, Hare Hare, Hare Rama, Hare Rama, Rama Rama, Hare Hare. It's beats chanting Tory Tory or Labour Labour.

johnny bravo

  • Posts: 2715
Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #22 on: March 22, 2012, 07:50:17 pm »
im thinking of some fyers, would plain A5 black and white printing be just as good, keeping costs down

roundbuilder

Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #23 on: March 23, 2012, 10:44:26 am »
what about changing the top part to, We already clean in this street

Or we clean many of your neighbours.

Scott Dean

Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #24 on: March 23, 2012, 11:05:25 am »
i was told by the print company i use that if you print on both sides your chances increase that it will be read as most people who collect the freebies from the floor just wont look...

not sure if you knew this either but they should be vat free ...

Erithwc

Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #25 on: March 23, 2012, 11:26:00 am »
Done not messing with it any more im getting desprate for leaflets as i only have about 1000 left  :-[ :-[


Window Washers

  • Posts: 9036
Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #26 on: March 23, 2012, 11:30:18 am »
thats a load better,

just take off the free quote and contact us (nobody pays for quotes in the first place anymore)

and replace with,  "Call Now On"

^^ thats a direct leading call to action  ;)
If your not willing to learn, No one can help you, If you are determined to learn, No one can stop you ;)

Erithwc

Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #27 on: March 23, 2012, 11:37:54 am »
thats a load better,

just take off the free quote and contact us (nobody pays for quotes in the first place anymore)

and replace with,  "Call Now On"

^^ thats a direct leading call to action  ;)

Just for you my dear  ;D ;D


Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #28 on: March 23, 2012, 02:54:18 pm »
Thats a great leaflet :)

I got one through yesterday entitled "DONT READ THIS LEAFLET" and under it in small lettering "if you like limescale in your kettle". Personally i dont want a water softener but if i did i would be all over that!

Window Washers

  • Posts: 9036
Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #29 on: March 24, 2012, 12:19:25 am »
thats a load better,

just take off the free quote and contact us (nobody pays for quotes in the first place anymore)

and replace with,  "Call Now On"

^^ thats a direct leading call to action  ;)

Just for you my dear  ;D ;D


can I just point out one last thing  ;D the call now on after the number does not need to be there it does not make sence maybe an arrow going to: or visit us online (which is below)  ;) just a thought
If your not willing to learn, No one can help you, If you are determined to learn, No one can stop you ;)

Smudgeoff Cleaning Services

  • Posts: 791
Re: New leaflets your thoughts please
« Reply #30 on: March 24, 2012, 12:58:58 pm »
I think this is ok for now it's not the best in the world but need more leaflets asap ;D ;D

Regards Paul



I like it... my only criticism would be is each line is a bullet point.

Looks a bit jumbled IMO.. ;)

Cheers mate
Darren
" To Get It All Off Call Smudgeoff"