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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: C.C.S. on April 27, 2009, 09:47:18 pm

Title: what do u think guys?
Post by: C.C.S. on April 27, 2009, 09:47:18 pm
any thoughts ,advices welcome.it's not 100% done but it's nearly there.thanks
www.colchester-cleaning-services.co.uk
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: Nathanael Jones on April 27, 2009, 09:49:09 pm
???
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: Blue Frog Systems on April 27, 2009, 09:50:21 pm
Guessing its your website and i think you forgot to post a link.

Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: C.C.S. on April 27, 2009, 09:52:07 pm
have another look
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: daniel worgan on April 27, 2009, 09:54:24 pm
I am in clacton and get calls sometimes for domestic cleans in colchester.
I can add you to my blog site if you like?

Dan ;)
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: C.C.S. on April 27, 2009, 09:58:37 pm
I am in clacton and get calls sometimes for domestic cleans in colchester.
I can add you to my blog site if you like?

Dan ;)
yes that will be grate.i'll another section on my website where i can add other links.thanks
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: michael papworth on April 27, 2009, 09:59:34 pm
Yes, the content is pretty good, but ...

Get someone to check your spellimg and punctuation's.
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: Blue Frog Systems on April 27, 2009, 10:01:17 pm
Yes, the content is pretty good, but ...

Get someone to check your spellimg and punctuation's.

 :-X
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: daniel worgan on April 28, 2009, 07:45:36 am
I am in clacton and get calls sometimes for domestic cleans in colchester.
I can add you to my blog site if you like?

Dan ;)
yes that will be grate.i'll another section on my website where i can add other links.thanks

Your details have now been added to the blog....

www.upvc-cleaning-services.blogspot.com

Dan :)
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: AuRavelling79 on April 28, 2009, 08:07:51 am
Off to work shortly so I've just read the home page. (I'll read the rest this pm if I remember!)

Looks good - my observations:-

Leave out the dates 2006 and 2008 - they are not long enough ago to be a benefit in the mind of the customer. Just tell them what you do.

1 million insurance (especially in the commercial world) does not sound enough. Leave the amount out or upgrade your cover to 5 million. Or just leave it as fully insured.

Split up the phone numbers and post code to make them easier to read.

(01324) 0987655  is easier to read than 013240987655 IMO.
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: MJH on April 28, 2009, 11:19:16 am
any thoughts ,advices welcome.it's not 100% done but it's nearly there.thanks
www.colchester-cleaning-services.co.uk

Can you clean my golf clubs? ;D
Title: Re: what do u think guys?
Post by: C.C.S. on April 29, 2009, 12:14:54 pm
hi thanks a lot all i'll try and check the spelling again
maybe you want to do a link exchange ...