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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: KINGAKNAA on November 05, 2010, 05:01:59 pm

Title: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: KINGAKNAA on November 05, 2010, 05:01:59 pm
Just wondered if this looks ok? The only thing I can look at changing is the "window cleaning" text needs to go back 1 space to make it look more central?

Anything else?

Cheers


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Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: TC1 on November 05, 2010, 05:06:15 pm
Looks good, although I personally would have "Window Cleaning" as big and bold as you can

 :)
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: mark mann on November 05, 2010, 05:12:23 pm
Looks good, although I personally would have "Window Cleaning" as big and bold as you can

 :)

i agree looks great but id have window cleaning much much bigger - how much have you been quoted for it?
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: clearlyclean on November 05, 2010, 05:15:45 pm
Yes get WINDOW CLEANER as big as you can
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: KINGAKNAA on November 05, 2010, 05:21:44 pm
Window cleaner bigger....done!  ;)

Was quoted £80 all in delivered, my mate is going to fit it.
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: erithwc on November 05, 2010, 05:23:05 pm
who did the design is he a pro or someone off ebay?  their is alot of the text on a door opening or a body curve so it won't look like it does in the picture. i would lose the we clean it all text aswell
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: andyM on November 05, 2010, 05:25:11 pm
I see the van that the graphics design is on is a Fiat Doblo.
If thats the van you have got you are going to have to change the layout.
On the side and back of Doblo vans you have formed panels where they put windows on the mpv Doblo version.
I would suggest arranging your text to fit inside the formed panels on the top half of the van.
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: outdoor restore on November 05, 2010, 05:31:23 pm
It looks as if you have three business names "mark one cleaning services", "we clean it all" and "spotless-image"
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: p1w1 on November 05, 2010, 06:04:28 pm
i would have the web address and tel # higher up
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: Smudger on November 05, 2010, 06:37:38 pm
Erith makes a very good point,  there is a lot of forms and door openings that will distort.

i would go to a local place and get them to 'design' it - it will give you some idea of how it would look
( my local company takes a picture and imposses the graphics over the van )

it all looks a little 'busy'

Darran
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: geefree on November 05, 2010, 07:10:51 pm
i would have the web address and tel # higher up

ditto
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: geefree on November 05, 2010, 07:11:29 pm
It looks as if you have three business names "mark one cleaning services", "we clean it all" and "spotless-image"

and ditto
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: rg1 on November 05, 2010, 07:36:32 pm
It looks as if you have three business names "mark one cleaning services", "we clean it all" and "spotless-image"

I agree. Too much going on and very hard to pinpoint what the name of the business is.
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: wezzy32 on November 05, 2010, 08:27:46 pm
email this chap and say darren from g&d washaway passed on his details prw2803@btinternet.com
he did mine for me
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: krave on November 06, 2010, 12:04:21 am
I would make the contact numbers a lot larger and put them on the whole length of the van where the we clean it all is, and put that smaller where the phone numbers are now.

Would be much more beneficial having the numbers larger than the we clean it all.
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: richywilts on November 06, 2010, 01:30:02 am
It looks as if you have three business names "mark one cleaning services", "we clean it all" and "spotless-image"

thats what i was goin to say very hard to distinguish what the name of the business is
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: Steven Shoreditch on November 06, 2010, 06:43:17 am
You can't drive on the queen's hi-way without a number plate.  Get one soon.
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: Wc Solutions on November 06, 2010, 03:03:33 pm
You can't drive on the queen's hi-way without a number plate.  Get one soon.

how did one of your customers manage to get on here and make a vid?

did you miss his bathroom window again?  :D
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: KINGAKNAA on November 06, 2010, 03:47:06 pm
OK, I've taken on board a lot of what has been said, many thanks by the way, and have come up with this.

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Post by: C.C.S. on November 06, 2010, 04:09:02 pm
OK, I've taken on board a lot of what has been said, many thanks by the way, and have come up with this.

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looks better but i would let the space between the letters bigger as it would be easier to fit,especially where the side doors it's closing.i  have a fiat doblo and ordered the sign writing online and fit it myself
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: Smudger on November 06, 2010, 04:51:11 pm
CCS - nice job!

OP - your graphics cover the door rail.  ccs is spot on, you are trying to cover too much of the vehicle.

Darran
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: C.C.S. on November 06, 2010, 05:08:04 pm
CCS - nice job!

OP - your graphics cover the door rail.  ccs is spot on, you are trying to cover too much of the vehicle.

Darran
thanks
keep it simple ,i had a previous van and signwriting was quite busy and hard to read from distance
Title: Re: GRAPHICS - CRITIQUE
Post by: andyM on November 06, 2010, 07:15:42 pm
I did previously mention to KINGAKNAA that his design layout wont work on a Doblo because of the formed edges on the bodywork panels.
And his revised design still wont work  ::)
Look at the pics of CCS's van and you will see what I mean.