My opinion,
They look good to me.
And if there working, great.
I agree with mike (not about them being crap) but more effort should bring in a higher return, i belive you should allways tweak advertising myself.
From memory i think my last lot sent out was around 60-70 and i got back i think 5jobs, so not quite as much but still a good return.
£400 from 7jobs is poor, but £400 from the little you invested is good.
Dont know about cartoons myself? think i preffer your approach.
why are you waiting a year to send these out? i do mine about every two months and allways get a good response, every year is to long and your missing out on a lot of work in my opinion.
I would post mine, but i only have it in a word document and dont think i can upload that hear, im gonna try and scan one but i aint got the hang of this scanner yet only had it a couple days.
If anyone can post the word doc, i will send it to them so they can post it.
And lastly, what are you doing with that wand? do you like it? i have the same one and cant stand it i think the results are terrible and its so awkward to use.
Have you tried there scrubba tool? it is so much better