[derek west]

need a catchy headline  for 2 add mags i advertise in.
at the moment ive got

"beautiful fresh clean carpets"
"thats our promise to you".

need something with 2 lines of text, header and then a sub header, roughly same length of text as above.

any help would be appreciated.

winning headline gets a cheque for £5 to buy beer with. (seriously)
unless you use a glide then you can buy some baby sham

derek

[JandS]

Can't think of anything at the mo but I would ditch the word beautiful.

John

[derek west]

i wanna ditch them all john
get your thinking cap on and that life changing cheque could be on its way to you
derek
ps...
competition closing date is the 8th of may, entrants must be over the age of 18,
entries after the closing date will not be used but may still be charged

[robert meldrum]

What's wrong with your original name " Affordable Carpet Cleaning " or are you aiming upmarket to the snob sector " If You Need To Ask You Can't Afford Us "

Having said that................I've found the vast majority of snobbery to be in council estates !!!

[derek west]

still affordable cleaners bob.
just after a catch line for my advert.
come on! you could put it towards a wee dram
derek

[Dennis]

Safe Sex!
On your Affordably Cleaned carpets

See and feel the difference
On your Affordably Cleaned carpets

[derek west]

well the first one will definately get there attention
derek

right! off to prontaprint to get the outlines drawn up, i can put the winning headline in last.

[daysdeepclean]

"Top Quality Carpet Cleaning"
   "At a Price You Can Afford"

         "When We Clean Your Carpets"
"You can See, Smell & Feel The Freshness" (Or change freshness for "The Difference")

"Don't Gamble When Choosing a Carpet Cleaner"
    "Our Quality of Service is Second to None!"

I'm off to another job now..... I'll see what other crap I come up with

[derek west]

i like them colin, a lak em a lot
derek

[clinton]

Think we deserve a fiver for trying

Why dont you change your name derek like paul is

How about northwichs sexeist carpet cleaner

[Joe H]

Must be the only carpet cleaner in Northwich then 

[Glynn]

One we use,
"Remember - When choosing a Carpet Cleaner, quality doesn't come cheap but we offer a service that we believe price wise & quality wise cannot be beat".........

[clinton]

Joe

I forgot that

[markpowell]

"A Clean Home Is A Healthy Home" with a pic of a baby crawling on a cream carpet.
"Carpets Showing You Up?"
Remember how your carpets used to look, feel and smell?
Mark

[mmartin]

Hi derek

"carpets dry as we say goodbye"

"we offer the promise that other companies
promise to offer"

[mmartin]

Hi derek

If i win donate the cheque to chariteeeee mate

mike

[Doctor Carpet (Ret'd)]

Cleanliness is next to Godliness................but only in an Irish dictionary




(No offence intended to anybody who is thinking of taking offence......or a gate or a potting shed.)

[clinton]

 

Give us some of them litle pils doc

[daysdeepclean]

"Thinking Of Hiring A Rug Doctor?"
"Don't Bother, They're pooe!" 

       "Splash And Dash"
"For a Fraction Of Your Cash" 

[Buster Ingram]

Go with West for the Best Rug Sucker