[* mike RH]

It's too cluttered.

Keep it simple and to the point.

What are you trying to achieve?

At a quick glance I see plumbing, web design, advertising for other window cleaners,

I found myself asking what is it you do? are you a window cleaning company or.....?

There's a lot of text too. Most people can't be bothered to read a lot of text so use headers and short to the point captions of text.

Just a 'at a glance' observation. 

[windowwashers]

It's too cluttered.

Keep it simple and to the point.

What are you trying to achieve?

At a quick glance I see plumbing, web design, advertising for other window cleaners,

I found myself asking what is it you do? are you a window cleaning company or.....?

There's a lot of text too. Most people can't be bothered to read a lot of text so use headers and short to the point captions of text.

Just a 'at a glance' observation. 

Hi there,

not sure if you even bothered to go to my site, But I cant find plumbing on it (forgive me if i am wrong, if you didnt bother to go or you did and you may have an old page loading try the refresh button. .

Thanks for your reply when you respond to this quote I will take on board what you have just said, I have had 9 neg comments for far out off 300 (cant be that bad I'm thinking


Jeff: sry forgot your other sites name no it know sry load day been up since about 4 this morning doing web design. Why have you not got a site for your window cleaning company? I can help if you need it (not being funny either)
in regards to SHOUTING (that is chat room talk m8)
Ian

[Davew]

20% of? shouldn't that be off?

[windowwashers]

20% of? shouldn't that be off?

yep, changed thanks for that 

[jeff1]

It's too cluttered.

Keep it simple and to the point.

What are you trying to achieve?

At a quick glance I see plumbing, web design, advertising for other window cleaners,

I found myself asking what is it you do? are you a window cleaning company or.....?

There's a lot of text too. Most people can't be bothered to read a lot of text so use headers and short to the point captions of text.

Just a 'at a glance' observation. 

Hi there,

not sure if you even bothered to go to my site, But I cant find plumbing on it (forgive me if i am wrong, if you didnt bother to go or you did and you may have an old page loading try the refresh button. .

Thanks for your reply when you respond to this quote I will take on board what you have just said, I have had 9 neg comments for far out off 300 (cant be that bad I'm thinking


Jeff: sry forgot your other sites name no it know sry load day been up since about 4 this morning doing web design. Why have you not got a site for your window cleaning company? I can help if you need it (not being funny either)
in regards to SHOUTING (that is chat room talk m8)
Ian

Fixed my link now, so have a look.
I don't have a web, I have never felt the need for one, but the way my business has expanded over the past few months, I am thinking twice about it.

If you look on the Academy forum and at the forum its self, it was built and designed by a 21 year old son of Jouk 45 and he has already offered to build me a web.
Thanks for the offer though.

[Davew]

pressure cleaning thoughout?

[windowwashers]

pressure cleaning thoughout?

what page did you get that from? and thanks for the help so far.

[Davew]

Home page right hand side.

[Davew]

Fasia? not fascia?

[windowwashers]

Fasia? not fascia?

first one sorted, where did you get the next?

[niceandclean]

Ian, do you design and put websites live for other people?

[Dean Aspects]

On the links page
...in fleetwood and surround...
...surrounding areas...
trusted in lower case rest of line in capitals
Reliability
German word in date...30th of August
In blue box company and needed

Dean

[Davew]

There area? (their I think).

[Davew]

what's timely matten?

[jeff1]

Ian I have only read you Q&A page at the moment, Just have a read of what you have in one of the answers.

Quote
We ask for payment to be sent within 48 hours of cleaning, if you are away call us when you get back to let us know payment is going to be late, if there is any problem please call us (we dont bite) if payment is made later than 21 days you will be charged a £2 late payment fee. Payments that continue on to be late will have services suspended till arrears are paid in full and the next clean is paid in advance.

UN-Quote
This is the way I would word it.

We ask for all payments to be made within 48 hours of Completion, If your were away during your clean, then please contact us on your return.
If there are any problems, then please contact us, we will endeavour to rectify any problems you may have.
If payments are later than 21 days, window washers reserve the right to charge a £2 late payment fee.
Any client with Continued late payments, may have there service suspended, until  full payments are recieved by our office, Window washers may also ask, for advanced payments for future cleans.

[Davew]

Presure washing? Major spell checking required I think. To be honest imo you have an impressive site but it's far, far too complicated with too much information for anyone looking for a cleaner. You asked

[windowwashers]

Ian, do you design and put websites live for other people?

yes i do, but they have to proof read first before it is live to public, I am not stupid. I may not be to good at english but I can design sites that work and get seen, this is what matters to people.

[windowwashers]

what's timely matten?

Sry for double quote.

DaveW if you are you reply please put where the problem is, as this is not helping in anyway, I have put this up as I cannot see many of the errors and welcome the help but to change it i need to knwo where on the site it is: what page and where on the page. cheers for your other comments though m8 

[Alex Wingrove]

hi

in my opinon its still to cluttered i didnt know what do and where to click, got me a bit flustered

[niceandclean]

Ian, do you design and put websites live for other people?

yes i do, but they have to proof read first before it is live to public, I am not stupid. I may not be to good at english but I can design sites that work and get seen, this is what matters to people.

Yes and no Ian. In my opinion your site is too cluttered and has way too much information, and if you had designed that for me, i would not be impressed. As it has already been said before, if i was a customer looking for a window cleaner, i would back up to google and look for something else. If you are going to offer your services for window cleaning, why not have your own website? And if you want to list lots of other window cleaners and services, put it on another site, where customers can click on an area and have a list of cleaners? Id be intersested in knowing if the cleaners you have on your site already have recieved work from you from your site.