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mk1

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opinions required please
« on: February 10, 2007, 05:19:04 pm »
http://www.mk1propertyservices.com/

just got our new www. up & running what do you all reckon ???

be nice !!!!!!!! :D :D

steve k

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« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2007, 05:30:41 pm »
I think that is spot on ;)

brett walker

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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2007, 05:44:38 pm »
Excellent  8) thats what i would like next a good website

But a bigger van may have to come first :-\

regards

Brett

SHINING EXAMPLE

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« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2007, 05:48:03 pm »
  • Question / Answer style is very effective.
  • Photo of bucket & cloth somehow detracts.

S_RICHARDSON

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« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2007, 05:52:15 pm »
Spot on mate! ;D



Shaun Richardson! :)

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« Reply #5 on: February 10, 2007, 06:22:24 pm »
I was impressed with this. Existing customers may well think of you first when they have little jobs that want doing, or recommend you to a neighbour.

I would imagine that will you have to generate your own traffic, either via leaflets or comments on your payment slips, or on the side of your vehicle.

I thought the bucket was okay. Syntax copy etc very good. You sounded vey proffesional to me, but prepared to take on small jobs as well as large. Which I imagine is the effect you were after.

Anyway even if we all hated it you still have to stick to your guns, but I liked it, and did not spot any obvious mistakes.

The poster who said he would like this but a bigger van came first. If you do it yourself it costs about £50 a year.

AuRavelling79

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« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2007, 07:44:04 pm »
Excellent site! Very good indeed.

Two tiny points, of which one is only my opinion.

1) In "about us" you talk about "loosing sight" it should be "losing sight" with one "o". (Spellcheck won't pick this up as "loosing" is a real word but probably not the one you really mean.)

2) The bit about starting in 2004 - which isn't that long ago - so perhaps something like:- between us we have "X" years of experience in the property maintenance field would make it appear as if you have more years under your belt.

Malc (G)

Sergeant in the Word Police!  ;D
It's a game of three halves!

aztec

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« Reply #7 on: February 10, 2007, 07:47:00 pm »
very nicely worded site well done

perhaps a few pics of before and after even, i need to build my site too any one know a good site builder in kent please

mk1

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« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2007, 08:51:23 pm »
well thank you all for the comments its been very helpful. only got this up & running this afternoon read it about five times (till i could read no more ) then posted it to see what the reaction was  :) :)

pictures will be added as we go along  ;) ;)

yes the painting goes well .......we do a lot of work for estate agents one agent asked me if i could paint.yes i replyed quoted got the job (handy when its pi##ing down outside  ;) ;)) also done some fencing all sorts of bits & bobs.

works for us always busy & shortly starting to do ironing as well as always getting asked for this service.

p.s this www cost less than £200.00 cheap advertising i reckon ????????

thanks again all of you.  ;) ;)

aztec

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« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2007, 09:25:58 pm »
could i have the details please of the site builder

mk1

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« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2007, 09:43:33 pm »
of course you can http://www.scisuk.com/ simon carter  ;) ;) but be warned he,s a busy boy & please mention me andy mk1 property services tar  ;) ;)

D.Salkeld_Ltd

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« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2007, 10:33:03 pm »
Nice site!  Simple and straight to the point.

You're in Lincoln!  I'm from Louth!  Been Window Cleaning 20 yrs this April.

Good luck with your business

David Salkeld
Not Perfect - But Honest

aztec

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« Reply #12 on: February 10, 2007, 10:54:50 pm »
thank you mk1 and good luck, i bet lots of work wil come your way with that very pro looking site my friend !!!!