[supernova77]

Hi All,

Here is a draft of our new A5 leaflet.

Any comments? Good and bad?

Andy 

Front / Back

[Rich1969]

Looks very good and quite professional, I only have a couple of suggestions and these are really being picky.

1) reduce the drop shadow on the headline & reduce font size to get headline on one line. or try centering or right justify
2) Add contact email on front under web address.
3) Remove the white outline around bullet point feature text on back.
5) Consider making headline on front and feature text on back the yellow butter cup colour (taken from front image), to make it stand out instead of drop shadow and white outlines.

feature text suggestions.

replace "we know what we are doing (est 2005)" with "We are knowledgeable and experienced (est. 2005)"

replace "Glass, frames and sill cleaned with every clean" with "Glass, frames and sills included in every clean" the word included gives better sense of value for money.

I hope that helps, as I say i'm being very picky there because its pretty darn good as it stands and mostly its a matter of taste so no right or wrongs.

[Tom-01]

It's good because there isn't a picture of you on it.

[H20cleaning]

The front is similar to the design i have just had made up! Top leaflets and they should get a lot of work.

[richywilts]

do u not offer other services such as gutters n that andy

[supernova77]

Thanks for your replies guys 

It's good because there isn't a picture of you on it. Smiley

You're just jealous that I'm the better looking one out of us!

 

[Tom-01]

Thanks for your replies guys 

It's good because there isn't a picture of you on it. Smiley

You're just jealous that I'm the better looking one out of us!

 

Thats not what Mum said!

[Rogue Trader]

I think it looks good , the only thing i would add is an address , i think that people will feel safer in calling if they have an address.

[colin bird]

Hi All,

Here is a draft of our new A5 leaflet.

Any comments? Good and bad?

Andy 

Front / Back

leaflet looks good mate,and have there place,but in my opinion,people buy from people not a piece of paper,meaning,if you canvass and talk to people they can see who is going to clean there windows,if they like you,they take you on,if they don't like the look of you they won't take you on even if you are cheap.
If you pay to put you leaflets out,and someone phones you,you have paid for that enquiry,then you have to go and price the job,when you arrive,if they don't like the look of you,they won't take you on,so the lead has cost you double money,if you canvass it costs only time,those are my thoughts for what there worth,having said that good luck