As i thought a lot of mixed opinions.Mike thinks its rubbish
Neil thinks it needs more info
scott martin thinks keep it short and sweet
Mark reckons dump the pics
Alan reckons you need full coulor photos
Cleaning co likes it
Homenclean reckons keep it short
Ableclean thinks its fine, and had a simualer ad that pulled £17000
And iv been advised to keep it full colour, go two colour, and keep it black on white
Anyway i apreciate all your advice but obviously couldnt follow it all.
I am having a few changes done at the minute and will post the final copy back on hear for you all to see.
I will then let you all know how it works for me, so anyone thinking of using somthing simualer will have a idea how much and what sort of work this type of ad will attract.