Brilliant beginnings.
I always think that the page needs to be seen without scrolling up, down or sideways for best impact, when I am looking for something, eg mc bits, if the page does not tell me what I want straight away then I tend to move on-- but then I'm a grumpy old man nowadays! When I just looked some of the text overlapped other bits, that may just be me. Keep playing with it until your'e happy with it. Mine needs redoing.
Trevor