Interested In Advertising? | Contact Us Here
Warning!

 

Welcome to Clean It Up; the UK`s largest cleaning forum with over 34,000 members

 

Please login or register to post and reply to topics.      

 

Forgot your password? Click here

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Branding Feedback Please.
« on: July 07, 2008, 06:48:50 am »
Just a  had a branding company do my company logo's, and Stationary.

I'd appreciate any feedback, thanks
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2008, 06:51:11 am »
My Leaflet...
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2008, 06:52:07 am »
Letterhead and Payment Slip
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

sjm

Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2008, 06:58:38 am »
Looks really good  ;D Just a point on payment slip though - is it a good idea to state when you will be back to clean ?  Dodgy weather and all that LOL

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2008, 07:03:14 am »
I always let my customers know what week of the month they should expect me, never state what day though.

I did this after a % said they never know when I was due - even though I turn the same week of every month - :-\

So far, I've always been able to meet this - although this weeks weather forecast could be an exception! :(
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2008, 07:04:53 am »
Has this all been printed already ?
I agree with sjm about the date of next clean.
I think the colours used are great, very fresh. I also think the handwriting on the flyer is a nice touch.
I do not like the block font used for your name to be honest, this could well be your branding so please don't take that to heart I am only giving my opinion.

Ian

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2008, 07:08:16 am »
Thanks Windowwashers.

I wasn't sure about the ' handwritten' Leaflet, but most seem to like it.

The Block Lettering, I may get him to change for the next print - as they haven't come out to great on the cards.
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

mr D

  • Posts: 913
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #7 on: July 07, 2008, 07:22:22 am »
doode, it has a real layed back surfer feel to it, like it alot!

only thing topoint out is those mellow colours tou have chosen will be hard to match with things like shirts etc not impossable but most the clotheing companys do bright bold primary colours.

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #8 on: July 07, 2008, 07:25:07 am »
Very Funny  - I traded one of my surfboards to the designer, as payment for the designs. ;D
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

Steve CM

Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #9 on: July 07, 2008, 07:29:29 am »
That has been designed by someone that knows what there doing hasn't it?

very strong indentity which is a great thing. The thing i would say is that it looks like your advertising an outdoor shop. Its a shame because the branding has been executed perfectly, and has a real strong brand feel....just not for a window cleaning company. can it not be adjusted? maybe with out the beach scene and just use a sky and clouds instead which will take you off the scent of an outdoor shop?

just my thoughts, the branding is very strong though so well done on that front ;)

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #10 on: July 07, 2008, 07:43:07 am »
Thanks Steve.

I wanted the beach, sea scene, as it ties in my name - The Seven Bays is used locally to describe this area, due its 7 bays/beaches .

I quite like the fact you could say that the '7' is the window, looking out over a bay.
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #11 on: July 07, 2008, 07:52:25 am »
7B sry do not know your name, could I ask what was the price to TM  ?


Ian

Steve CM

Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #12 on: July 07, 2008, 07:53:55 am »
Thanks Steve.

I wanted the beach, sea scene, as it ties in my name - The Seven Bays is used locally to describe this area, due its 7 bays/beaches .

I quite like the fact you could say that the '7' is the window, looking out over a bay.

i can understand what your saying, it just doesn't look like a window looking over a bay though. but as i said earlier, good strong branding!! ;)

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #13 on: July 07, 2008, 07:55:56 am »
It was a trade off  - just a old resin tinted longboard.   Definitely a good deal for me :)
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

The Seven Bays Window Cleaning Company

  • Posts: 497
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #14 on: July 07, 2008, 07:58:17 am »
It was done by :

www.madimo.co.uk/
THE SEVEN BAYS WINDOW CLEANING COMPANY

Steve CM

Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #15 on: July 07, 2008, 08:14:41 am »
them boys can design ;)

Rob.Hall

  • Posts: 1094
Re: Branding Feedback Please.
« Reply #16 on: July 07, 2008, 11:43:40 am »
Like it.

People in your area will know that you are local and it can be a talking point.

The first image is catching and draws your attention.