I'm doing one for my daughter Lewis and after having a read of some of the hints, it said keep it simple, as most people will only look at a web page for a few seconds and I think this is true.
I sat there for a few hours today adding this and that, just looked at how simple yours was, I went back to my website and deleted most of it because it was too packed.
So thanks to you, I have to start again now, creating something a little more simpler.
Whats the old saying Lewis?
? K.I.S.S.= Keep it simple Stupid,
and that's Just what you have done, you kept it simple to catch there attention