[richywilts]

this is a prototype of my new leaflets there are things being changed to it email etc which is my old one graphic designer has any views and opinions and critisism welcome

[richywilts]

forgot to mention guest appearance from gav lamm in 2 of the photos!!!!!!!!!!!

[R W C™]

Personally I wouldnt have so many pics of yoursef cleaning, one or 2 would be better...

[richywilts]

im only on 2 of them

[Richard Neal]

I like it, the colours stand out well and it is well written, you have put outweight instead of outweigh at the start of the text on the back.

[mikecam]

On the left hand side..."weekly cleaning frequency",  people may think its just that you're offering, i.e every week.
And the other thing on the left hand side again,.."easy payment options", it looks like it may be expensive with ways to pay it off!!! Maybe "easy payment methods" may be better. Looks great otherwise.

[Alistair@AWC]

Id like to see those carbon fibre poles that you transport your water about in!


And its window sill not cill!

[AuRavelling79]

Ok; nice leaflet - now here is Malc Gold's proof reading (cost one pint of finest ale ) -

On the left you have put "weekly cleaning frequency" - do you mean 6 weekly or every 6 weeks because in the text on the back you go on about your 6 weekly frequency wfp being better than two weeks trad.

"Do you need a regular reliable window cleaner" should have a "?" at the end.

"... transport this water to site using specially designed carbon fibre pole" etc should have "transport this water to site. Using specially" etc

Under benefits 1st para "from safety of the ground" should be "from the safety of the ground"

Under benefits 2nd para you've put "wipe you're cill" when it should be "your cill".

Our "standard clean inlcudes" has "includes" with the "c" and "l" transposed,

"save you money and less hassle" should be "save you money and you'll have less hassle"

I wouldn't mention being established 3 years - it isn't long enough to be impressive to a custy - IMO

Don't mention not collecting unless seriously overdue - just put that you generally don't collect. - IMO

[richywilts]

haha gold i knew you would pop up thats exactly why i popped it up on here for your proof reading abilities!!!!!!

[Smudger]

Nice leaflet






BUT......





i think it's very busy and too much info for your average punter to take in - i think it's great if you found
this on a web site.

Darran

[richywilts]

i know i understand what you mean by being too busy but i produce my leaflet on near enough card and from my last leaflets which i had done which i got loadsa work off due to professional look and feel of the leaflet im trying to educate people with this leaflet as well as just pick up customers

[Gav Camm lammy 283]

hey im copyrighted 

[Smudger]

your assuming that people want to be educated and not just after someone to clean windows !

i like the leaflet - we used one with lots of info, services, wfp, etc....

and many customers still asked q's like do you clean conny roof's..?

yes - it says so on the leaflet.

for dropping through doors i think big bold and simple works best.
your one is the kind i would pick up in a showroom/shop

Darran

[bobby p]

it looks good,would appeal to the upper crust type of customer, not the lowrenters

[windiewasher]

Far too much information.looks ok but far too much info I have  a6 leaflets with what the customers want on them and it definately works.

[Sean Dyer]

Just my opinion rich , but i reckon it is to busy , could you not cut the back down to the essential info and bullet point and bigger font it, people wont read all that they just scan quickly if they dont bin it from the get go, it is designed well though....

[Ian101]

very nice leaflet Rich ... only thing I would defo remove is the bit about coming round to collect if seriously overdue.

Much more fun to see their faces when ur there unexpectedly 

Hope ur paying Gav an appearence fee ?