[daz1977]

hi, below is the leaflet that i am thinking of using and was wondering if any one had any tips or advice on parts that i should change

thanks

[clean]

Looks different and eye catching but my only comment  on the wording is the "low competetive rates",that to me says "desparate",
i have never offerd competative prices because knowone can offer the same high standard as me,you get what you pay for 
PK

[pingu]

Could you not say "We clean the frames, not just the panes"? wipe almost smacks of a bodge job.

Cheers
Dave.

[TonyD]

Looks good, simple and easy to read, get's straight to the point.  But, I'd agree with the above and remove the "low" bit from competitive rates and change the "wipe" to "clean". 

[dean123]

the bottem bit of text

i  have on mine

call now to book your FREE no obligation quote (thats all thats needed )

and have a email addy on there as well

[GWCS]

the bottem bit of text

i  have on mine

call now to book your FREE no obligation quote (thats all thats needed )

and have a email addy on there as well

who the hell pays for a quotation these days???

or do you really need to state the obvious?

[dean123]

this is wot i got back when i shown a pro mine (i am just passing on the info no critisum from me  )

make a head line specfic to window cleaning (THE BENIFITS) not necessary a bussiness name either

ca n yuo get testimonials from happy customers ? if so get those on (2 or 3 aer ideal)

and if you getting them done at the printers have them printed both sides dont matter which way they land then  
(i had top and botterm the same  just the bit in the middle was changed )

[daz1977]

thanks for all the advice, i will get it change with these bits of advice, and post a new one up

i dont view any of the advice as critisum as i believe we can all learn something from each other, i havent been a window cleaner for that long, and wanted advice from people who had leafleted and got results from them

regarding the free quotes,  some people still think that they have to pay you for you time, even when just quoting

[daz1977]

had the changes done,  what do you think

[dean123]

call NOW ( i think the pros call it a direct route of action )

[daz1977]

cheers

[GWCS]

the whole of the St Austall

or

the whole of St Austall..

personally i think it should be the latter..

otherwise its ike saying "cover the whole of the london"..

unless you mean "cover the whole of the St Austall area"

[Sapphire Window Cleaning]

This is my leaflet thats going to print this week.

[Sapphire Window Cleaning]

This is my leaflet thats going to print this week.

[A & J Owen Window Cleaning]

WHY NOT PUT LET ME DEAL WITH THE PANES IN YOUR LIFE !!

AND LOW RATES SOUNDS A BIT DESPERATE MATE