[D woods]

High Guys
We have just had a video made have a look at www.allcleanservices.co.uk
its on the front page, tell us what you think.

Not sure if I like it or not.

[Moderator David@stives]

Dave

It does the job, clear and consice and gives all the info without browsing your site.

I would have it on  mine.

[STEVE-UK]

Visually the video looks good but the girl sounds like she has a cold ..

IMO the animoto clips at the bottom dont do you any favours

[Alex Gardiner]

Good promotions video.

 I would personally lose the girl as she is not needed, I'm sure she is a lovely person though. When she is in shot it is obvious that she is reading from a card beside the camera, if you feature a person they need to be talking to the camera. Really for this you do not need a person at all, just a narrator - the video does the job. Also her voice does sound like she has adenoid problems.

[Chris Galloway]

Id go along with that. She does sound very "air hostess doing the safety briefing".

As Alex said not looking at the camera, needs to know the script and be "personable" for the camera. otherwise yes a narrator will do.

Perhaps get the BOSS/MD whatever he may be listed as - on the video, even if its just a hello and introduction and have a narrator doing the rest.

but thats being picky.

But as Dave said

It does the job, clear and concise and gives all the info without browsing your site.

[D woods]

Thanks for the feedback guys, I cant change anything now because it has been signed off.

I dont suppose we will win any new contracts because of the video, but you never know.

[Moderator David@stives]

David

I think in an ideal world the above points are valid, but since you have already done it i dont think customers will be that critical.
Like i said earlier it gets out the message instead of trawling your site.

[D woods]

Cheers Dave.