[Blue Frog Systems]

Well as i used to have an office live site i tried my hand at switching over .... i gave up when my wife told me i was swearing quite loud and the kids could hear me .... they had been asleep but i had woke them  :shock:

Anyway, gave up on the transfer and decided to do one myself. Its not quite finished yet as i need to get a logo in there, tidy up a bit, my wife is going to make it look pretty in places.... but the main part is there.

Take a look and tell me what you think.

Criticise nicely please or i might just do something i shouldnt  :lol:

http://bluefrogsystems.co.uk/

[Smudgeoff Cleaning Services]

Looks good mate, but what was wrong with your old site?

Daz 

[Blue Frog Systems]

As above Daz, was an office live site and they are shutting it down tomorrow

[Erithwc]

Contact detail's eg phone number should be one of the first thing's you see on the site  

Paul

[Blue Frog Systems]

Going in with the Logo ... something the wife is sorting for me.

[Banbury Window Cleaning]

looks good mate!

[Blue Frog Systems]

Thanks PureH2O

[DaveG]

I like it, nothing too flash 

Like the little slide show too

[Blue Frog Systems]

Thanks H2ose ... need to get a few more pics into that slideshow yet... thought id throw a few in to start

[Mike #1]

really good site mate you have done really well.  Mike

[SB Cleaning]

Looks good BF well done fella

[carl stanton]

just the job, but as said number on top section, maybe below site tabs, or alongside name at top

[DMC Window Cleaners Ltd]

some honest feed back for you good and bad bits

home page bad
company name should said out more with a logo
theres no contact details on home page number should be at top easy to find
remove name in first paragraph why have twice
picture and text need to justify
bottom section needs justify

home page good
clear and crisp back drop
good clear picture
social feeds and pictures at bottom
not over top

golbal pages bad
need pics
spacing on page needs sorting
text on page is a little too big

golbal pages good
did you know is a great idea but make more questions in it

payment page pretty good

also you need to look at seo as you havnt got any

all in all with a few little tweaks a pretty good site

hope you dont mind my in put

[Blue Frog Systems]

Cheers DMC ... yeah those are all in hand cheers just needed to get it live

[DMC Window Cleaners Ltd]

also as your using wordpress there are other themes that also look very good.
have a look at the plugins there is a lot of great ones.
a few are
yoast seo
mobile web site
xml site
contact form

maybe a thought about getting a copywriter

[Blue Frog Systems]

I like that theme

Am working on plugins

like i said its working progress at the moment

[DMC Window Cleaners Ltd]

thats fine i think its better to give you honest feedback rather then just good site etc give me a shout when its finished